Seven Laws: Waiting for the bus in the rain
Author: Wei Meng].
The weather is cold, the wind shakes the trees, and the street is wide and the water enters the ditch during the day.
Hug the lover on the bench, and hold the clothes at the head of the small pavilion.
Looking back, Lang smiled, and felt deeply sad.
A little Lingze is like tears, and the heavy rain has flowed.
Note: This poem is composed with a new rhyme.
This poem "Walking Alone in the Rain" depicts the scene of a person walking in the rain with vivid pictures and delicate brushstrokes, evoking sad memories. Emotionally rich and beautifully spoken.
The first couplet, "The cold wind shakes the trees, and the street is wide and the water enters the ditch during the day", with the cold weather, cold wind, and rain as the background, depicts a scene of the street in the clear rain. And "Quiet Street and Wide Water into the Ditch" uses the quietness and spaciousness of the street to set off the poet's loneliness and loneliness. This couplet not only depicts the environment, but also sets the emotional tone of the whole poem.
The couplet "hugging the lover's bench and holding the clothes in the small pavilion" depicts the scene that the poet saw on the street. He saw a couple of lovers trying to hug under a bus shelter on the street. Although the lover hugs on the street, it is okay in this situation. This couplet is sincere in emotion and subtle in language, recording the scene of the little lovers holding their clothes and hugging each other.
The neck couplet, "Looking back at Lang with a smile, and feeling the sorrow of the guest with a deep step", contrasts the comparison between looking back and walking to cause sorrow, highlighting the contradictions and entanglements in the poet's heart. The emotional exchange of others seems to be an ordinary event, and it is not the poet's business, but after all, it still deeply evokes the poet's sad memories.
The tail couplet, "A little bit of Lingze is like tears, and the heavy rain has flowed", uses a little raindrop as a metaphor for tears, depicting the pain and helplessness in the poet's heart. "Heavy Rain Has Flowed" vividly expresses the helplessness and sadness of the poet with the scene of heavy rain falling like a beaded curtain under an umbrella.
The whole poem is sincere, the language is beautiful, and the images are vivid. The poet expresses his inner emotions and feelings by depicting the scene he sees during his walk in the rain, and at the same time presents the reader with a unique aesthetic experience. The strength of this poem lies in the sincerity of the emotion, the beautiful language, and the vivid imagery, which leaves a deep impression.