There are all kinds of things happening in the world every day, and there are many bad phenomena in our lives: driving and calling**, littering confetti, scribbling on walls, wasting water.
Have you found any of the above phenomena in your life?What other undesirable phenomena have you discovered around us?
The content of the assignment. 1.Be able to clearly write down a phenomenon in your life and your own opinion on this phenomenon, and you can also write down ways or suggestions for improvement.
2.Able to actively communicate ideas in writing with others.
Open up the idea of the assignment and understand the essay questions.
What should I write about this assignment?
In this assignment, you are asked to write about a phenomenon or problem that you have found in your life, and what you think about it.
What should I pay attention to in this exercise?
1.Describe the phenomenon with examples.
2.Write down some reasons for your thoughts.
3.If there are suggestions or ways to improve, you can also write them down.
4.Once you're done, read it for yourself and make it clearer and more coherent.
Learn to choose materials. To write this assignment, you should first write about the problems you have found in your life, then describe the phenomena with examples, then explain how you feel about the problems, and finally put forward suggestions for improvement and the benefits of such suggestions. Here's where you can start:
Carefully assembled. Think about it: What problems did you find in your life?How did you find out about this issue?What are your suggestions for improvement?
Clever topics. A good topic can arouse the interest of friends in reading. Use the tips below to come up with another topic for your essay!
How to Prepare a Question Example of a question.
The same title as the essay "I Have an Idea".
Use the problems found as the title: "The Mother Who Loves to Play with Mobile Phones", "Xiaohe is "Sick", and "The Bow Family".
Enhance your assignment skills.
How can I write my thoughts clearly?Next, let's take a look at some of the best ways to write this assignment well.
One morning, when I went for a walk in the garden, I saw a little boy picking flowers and grass in a flower bed.
I thought to myself, this is really an uncivilized behavior. I thought it would be better to put up a sign in the flower bed with a warm reminder that "grass and flowers are alive, please take care of them". Flower beds can also be fenced off so that people don't pick flowers and plants at will. (The little author first put forward the problems he found in one sentence, and then put forward the solution to the problem, which is clearly organized.) ）
The shape of the somatosensory car is cute, easy to carry, easy to park, and inexpensive, and it quickly became popular among young people. Many people directly use it as a means of transportation for close travel, and the manufacturers who sell it also use "transportation" as their selling point. The somatosensory car is not a means of transportation, so it lacks corresponding production and sales standards and management norms, has no accelerator and brake, and completely relies on the change of human attitude to control the direction and speed. And many people use it quickly and slowly, interspersing indiscriminately, grabbing the road and going against the road, which can be said to be dangerous. (The author describes the advantages of the car, and on the other hand, he explains his own view that the car is used as a means of transportation.) The brushwork is flexible and lively. ）
Excerpt from "Jimu News Review: Somatosensory cars should be completely stopped when they hit the road", with changes.
Connecting the best works. Wang, I have an idea.
Do you like puppies?Look at the puppy's round eyes, fluffy body and wagging tail, it's so cute!But for cleaners, puppies can be a nuisance. Do you know why they hate puppies?
Lo and behold, here comes - a fashionably dressed aunt is walking her dog. She was humming and looking happyThe puppy was running and stopping happily and seemed to be happy. Suddenly, the puppy squatted on the sidewalk and discharged a bunch of "stinks", then slashed a few empty paws and ran away. Its owner didn't even glance at the pile of "stinking" and left. "What if someone steps on it?I cried out in surprise. Suddenly I felt that the snow-white puppy was so dirty and dirty, and its owner was not beautiful at all.
It is said that dogs are good friends of children, but there are also many children who are afraid when they see dogs. Do you know why?
Look, the dog owners took them out to play without leashing them. Golden retrievers, huskies, wolfdogs, pit bulls, ......Running around in the community, sometimes seeing children will scream viciously, scaring the children to flee in all directions. Some dogs can even bite children. However, those dog owners just don't tie their dogs on a leash and say that their dogs are very obedient. Dad said: "It's normal for dogs to be ignorant, and people are speechless if they are unreasonable." ”
Dog owner, do you hear me?The cleaner is sighing, and the scared child who has been bitten by a dog is crying!Please be "civilized" by dog owners!That is, to clean up the dog's feces, you only need to bend over;That is, tie the dog leash, hold the puppies, and take care of them, all you need to do is with a little heart. Dog owners should have seen the reminder sign of civilized dog breeding, right?In fact, isn't civilized dog raising to clean up the dog's feces in time and tie the dog on a leash when you go out?
Small moves, big civilizations. Ask the owners of the dog to imagine how chaotic the neighborhood would be if everyone let the puppies run around, bark, and pull "stinky" in the neighborhood, and you may be the next person to step on the shit. If everyone is civilized and has dogs, how beautiful, harmonious, and civilized the community will become!
Civilization starts with small things, dog owners, let's act quickly!
The author of the article begins with doubts to create suspense and arouse the curiosity of readers. Then explain the phenomenon, through the dog owner ignoring the dog's "stench" everywhere and walking the dog without a leash, the phenomenon found by himself is clearly explained in an orderly manner. Then put forward an initiative, list a series of uncivilized dog raising behaviors, and once again advocate that everyone raise dogs in a civilized manner. Reasonable advice calls on everyone to raise dogs in a civilized manner, and the tone is sincere. ）
Selected from the "Language Newspaper Gold Award Essay".
What aspects did the author grasp to write his thoughts clearly?
What examples does the author use to describe the phenomenon in a coherent manner?
Summary. Write your thoughts clearly, you can cite typical examples around you, and talk about your feelings in connection with the reality of life, so that the narrative can resonate with readers.
2.In order to make the article more reasonable, you can also make your own suggestions for improvement.
I have an idea.
I noticed that there are a lot of smokers.
Once I was on the bus and saw an uncle in the carriage muffling a cigarette ......
At home, as soon as Dad got home from work, he would sit on the sofa and smoke a cigarette while watching TV, ......
I had an idea to invent a device ...... that would reduce the number of times people smoke
I hope that people will be able to reduce smoking so that our families and societies will be better.
Dial: The case could be described in more detail. You can describe the phenomenon and say what you think. Ideas or suggestions should be expressed in a coherent manner. ）
Fan Wen (after upgrading).
I have an idea.
I noticed that there are a lot of smokers.
Once I was on the bus and saw an uncle in the carriage muffling a cigarette ......There were many passengers on the train, including the elderly, children, and even pregnant women, and there were signs saying no smoking in the car, but the uncle pretended not to see them. The smoke was spreading inside the carriage, and I had no choice but to cover my nose.
At home, as soon as Dad got home from work, he would sit on the sofa and smoke a cigarette while watching TV, ......At this time, my mother and I would always stop him. I learned from books that smoking has many harms, tobacco contains nicotine, which is a carcinogen, and long-term smoking can increase the probability of lung cancer. According to some data, about 1.1 billion people worldwide smoke, and 4 million people die each year from smoking-related diseases.
I had an idea to invent a device ...... that would reduce the number of times people smokeCigarettes must be fitted with this device in order to be ignited. This kind of device will set a smoking time once a day, and after smoking once, you can not continue to smoke, so as to effectively reduce the harm caused by smoking.
I hope that people will smoke less so that our families and societies will be better.
Accumulate good words and sentences, learn wonderful pens, and flowers.
Creative beginning. Create a scenario: Set up a vivid situation that leads to the following.
After lunch at school, I drank drinks from the cafeteria while walking down the verdant path, ready to go back to the classroom to do my homework. At this time, I was stunned by the scene in front of me: I saw a bunch of drink boxes and straws lying in the corner of the grass, and there were dense small ants crawling on them.
Direct quote: Quote buzzwords to stimulate reading interest.
There's no greater distance in the world than when we're sitting together and you're playing with your phone. "Once, I watched a cartoon in which people were looking down at their phones, completely oblivious to everything around them. How ridiculous this scene is!However, this scene is now real in our lives.
Straight to the point: straightforward, the general leader of the whole article.
In life, there are many people who like to have pets, but there are some people who do not take good care of their pets, and as a result, they cause inconvenience to other people's lives.
Featured ending. Quote appeal: Make a call to action and draw attention.
Mr. Cai Yuanpei said: "People's health depends not only on diet, but also on exercise. "So I call on everyone to exercise more and exercise more!Let's be more energetic.
Summary and summary: summarize as a whole and highlight the advantages.
Look!In this way, it not only makes reasonable use of resources, but also cultivates students' awareness of conservation and environmental protection.
Wonderful paragraphs. Write Discovery: Find the problem from the subtleties.
Example 1: My dad is a "mobile phone controller". Since my dad got a new phone, I'm no longer my dad's "baby". You see, he's concentrating on his "new baby" again.
Example 2 Nature has given people many inspirations: the invention of ** borrowed the principle of bamboo dragonfly, and the streamlined steamship was invented in imitation of whales on the bottom of the sea. So I thought: why don't we build a lightweight exterminator modeled after the woodpecker's beak and anteater's tongue?
Write examples: Give examples to get attention.
Example 1 I found that there are often small advertisements in the community, and there will be some small advertisements of "pipe dredging" and "emergency unlocking" in our corridors, or red or black notes are particularly dazzling on the white wall. In addition, there will be advertisements such as "moving" and "renting" in the elevator room, which are pasted on the metal wall of the elevator, and it is difficult to get them down, and even if they are taken down, they will leave an ugly mark.
Example 2 The so-called "Chinese-style crossing the road" means that regardless of the red light and green light, regardless of whether there is a car or not, a group of people will be gathered and they will start to cross the road forcibly. This phenomenon can really be seen everywhere, especially during rush hour. Traffic accidents due to jaywalking have been reported many times in the news.
Write suggestions: Reasonable suggestions and clear organization.
Example 1 I want to set up a "safety knowledge team" in the class to promote safety knowledge and enhance everyone's safety awareness during class meetings and morning meetings. We can find some news reports about the dangers of fighting in classrooms and corridors to read to everyone, so that students can realize the dangers of chasing and fighting at will. And not only on campus, but also outside the campus, if you chase and fight on the road, it is even more dangerous.
Example 2: I want to invent a new type of exterminator. In this type of exterminator, we can first install a computer chip, so that it can detect diseased trees accurately. Next, we can press the red button on the handle, and a pointed, hooked steel pipe similar to a woodpecker's beak will pop out, which can make a very small hole in the tree of the pest with unerring accuracy, and then use the hooked steel pipe to hook the pest out.
Guidance is practiced with the text.
What are some of the "wonderful sounds" you've heard?Try to write a few sentences to communicate with your classmates, such as, "Birds are the singers of nature......"The kitchen is a ** hall ......”
Analyze the requirements for pen practice.
Write a few words about one of the "wonderful sounds" you've heard.
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