This article mainly talks about Chinese table tennis player Wang Yidi's qualification for the mixed team World Cup trials, and the controversy caused by her form and performance. The article also mentioned the support and expectations for Wang Yidi, as well as the evaluation of the third-person competition and players in the Olympic women's team. The article concludes with a discussion question: "Do you support the reuse of Wang Yidi?"."First of all, the article mentions the importance of national table tennis players preparing for the mixed team World Cup, as well as the way to select the lineup of players.
Then, the article focused on Wang Yidi's ability to prove his strength through the selection competition in the outside controversy, as well as the way of employing the person in charge, Ma Lin. Then, the article mentioned that the combination of Wang Yidi and Lin Gaoyuan won three victories, won the quota, and stimulated Wang Yidi's enthusiasm for the competition. Finally, the article gives an outlook on Wang Yidi's performance in the upcoming mixed team World Cup and Olympic Games, as well as her support and expectations.
The overall narrative logic of the article is clear, but there is too much information in some expressions, resulting in lengthy and unconcise sentences. At the same time, the article showed some inaccurate words, and some sentences were not smooth enough. When revising, attention should be paid to expressing the point of view concisely and clearly, and at the same time adjusting the structure of the sentence to make the logic more coherent and enhance the readability of the article.
Suggestion: The article can first introduce the importance of the Chinese table tennis team's preparation for the mixed team World Cup and the way of the selection lineup, and then discuss Wang Yidi's experience and performance, as well as the controversy and doubts about her from the outside world. Then, you can highlight Ma Lin's employment standards for the players, as well as the performance of the combination of Wang Yidi and Lin Gaoyuan in the selection competition. Finally, we can look forward to the competition between Wang Yidi and the third person of the Olympic women's team, and solicit readers' opinions on supporting the reuse of Wang Yidi.
In addition, when revising, pay attention to simplifying sentences and paragraphs, and avoid lengthy descriptions and repetitive ideas. At the same time, it is necessary to ensure that the sentences are expressed accurately and clearly, and avoid inappropriate words and incoherent logic.