Tug of war
Today, we had a fierce tug-of-war on the school playground.
Before the start of the competition, the students came to the playground with confidence, and the students of our two classes in Year 4 stood at each end of the rope. We clung to the hemp rope and leaned back, waiting for the referee's command. As soon as the referee gave the order, we pulled back with all our might. The boys in our class worked very hard, and they were all red-faced and sweaty. With their efforts, our strength gradually surpassed that of the other, and the red cloth symbol slowly moved towards us.
The girls were pulling hard, but the boys in our class were pushing too hard, and in the end we won. Amidst laughter, we high-fived each other in celebration of victory. Although this tug-of-war competition is simple, it has taught us that unity is strength. Only when we work together can we overcome difficulties and achieve victory.
Through this competition, I also realized my shortcomings. In the future study and life, I will work harder to exercise myself and improve my physical fitness and teamwork ability. At the same time, I also hope that the school can hold more such activities, so that we can grow up in happiness and improve in the competition.
Famous teacher's comments:
This fourth-grade student's tug-of-war essay is written vividly and interestingly, full of tense and exciting competition atmosphere.
The beginning of the article is concise and clear, directly introducing the theme of the game, without too much foreshadowing and embellishment, and directly bringing the reader into the scene of the game. This straightforward approach can quickly grab the reader's attention and make the reader interested in the game.
The description of the competition process in the article is very detailed, not only the comparison of the strength of the two sides, but also the expressions and movements of the students, so that the reader feels as if they are in the game and can feel the tension and excitement of the game. This vivid way of describing makes the article informative and interesting to read.
In addition, the article is also interspersed with some thoughts and reflections, such as "unity is strength", etc., making the article not only a narrative, but also has a certain meaning of thinking and enlightenment. These reflections and revelations are also very valuable to the reader.
Overall, this is a very good tug-of-war essay. In the future, you can continue to maintain this vivid and detailed writing style, and at the same time, you can also try more writing techniques and techniques to improve your writing level.