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The pillow has been cold, and the window is bright again. I know that the snow is heavy at night, and I hear the sound of breaking bamboo. "Don. Bai Juyi's "Night Snow". Snow is silent and smellless, and can only be distinguished by color, shape, and posture, while in the deep night, human vision is completely useless, and the image of snow is naturally impossible to catch.
It is from this special situation that the poet uses the side to set off, and writes from the four levels of touch (cold), vision (light), feeling (knowledge), and hearing (smell), with many twists and turns. So as to vividly write a night snow.
There is neither color depiction nor gesture depiction in the poem, and it is simply inconspicuous at first glance. But if you taste it carefully, you will find that it is dignified and simple, fresh and elegant.
In this issue, I share a song of Du Xunhe's "Snow" with you. The writing technique of this poem is somewhat similar to Bai Juyi's, which is also written from the perspective of touch, sight, and hearing, but the difference is that Du Shi writes about the snow scene seen in the early morning. The full poem is as follows:
The wind stirs the sky and the bones are cold, and the light is bright in the dawn.
There is no bird shadow in the rivers and lakes, and the sound of folding bamboo is heard in the valley.
There are many similarities in the nests, and Lu Qi is generally flat.
The boy in the robe said coldly, and there was a woodcutter who walked on his feet.
"Don. Du Xunhe "Snow".
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The wind stirs the sky and the bones are cold, and the light is bright in the dawn. ”
The wind blew through the sky and it was bone-chilling, and the snow illuminated the windows as the day dawned.
The word "cold" in the first sentence sets the emotional tone of the whole poem.
The word "stirring" writes the strength of the wind and renders the cold of the snow.
The word "window bright" is very well written. It shows that the snow is falling heavily and deeply, and the reflection of the snow is refracted into the window, highlighting the whiteness of the snow.
The first couplet depicts the coldness of the environment, the size of the snow, and the whiteness of the snow from the tactile and visual perspectives.
There is no bird shadow in the rivers and lakes, and the sound of folding bamboo is heard in the valley. ”
There is no shadow of a bird on the water surface of the rivers and lakes, and the sound of bamboo being crushed by snow can be heard in the valley.
"No Birds" is written from a visual point of view, reflecting the size of the snow;
The sound of folding bamboo" is written from an auditory point of view, reflecting the weight of the snow and the strength of the snow.
The combination of audio-visual and audio-visual is written about the snow scene seen by the poet.
There are many similarities in the nests, and Lu Qi is generally flat. ”
The nest has a lot of similarities, with snow covering the ground at the fork in the road, and it all looks equally flat.
The "nest" has become "similar" and the "road" has become "generally flat", reflecting the vast scene of snow and covering a wide area.
The neck couplet depicts the "nest" and "road" in the snow from a visual point of view, which sets off the size of the snow.
The boy in the robe said coldly, and there was a woodcutter who walked on his feet. ”
Boys in brocade clothes, don't complain about the cold, you don't see, the woodcutter is walking barefoot on the snow in thin clothes.
The couplet expresses the poet's sense of injustice and his sympathy for the working people at the bottom of society. The best part of writing is:
Using contrasting rhetorical techniques, the "boy in the robe" and "the cold speech" and the "woodcutter" and "stomp on the feet", one wearing a "robe" and the other "stomping on the feet", constitute a sharp contrast, revealing the social reality of the disparity in the living conditions of different classes.
Closely related to the title of the poem "Snow", "The Boy in the Robe" and "Words are Cold" reflect the snow and cold characteristics of "cold bones" in the first couplet.
Summary: The title of the poem is "Snow", but the whole poem does not contain a single word "snow", but almost every sentence does not leave the snow, the description is vivid, and the emotional expression is natural and smooth.
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