The primary school student's creation of "Waiting" became popular, and the words were "full of bitterness", which moved the teacher
The phenomenon of primary school students getting 0 points in test papers is frequent, so in such a situation, it is generally believed that primary school students are naughty, willful, ignorant, and not serious enough in their studies. However, the actual situation needs to be analyzed concretely, as elementary school students excel in composition.
Generally speaking, elementary school students may be relatively poor in writing due to their young age, but because they are simple-minded, they are able to truly express their inner thoughts and emotions in their compositions. Because of this, their compositions are both interesting and moving. Without further ado, let's take a look at the essays written by elementary school students.
A primary school student's essay "Waiting" became popular because it was "full of bitterness" between the lines, and the teacher was moved after reading it!Some people think that today's students are generally rebellious and alienated from their parents, but elementary school students have not yet entered the rebellious period, so they are more able to understand their parents' efforts and express their gratitude. This is the case with this elementary school student, whose essays are praised by the teacher as a scholar and a god, and the teacher is also proud to have such a student.
As can be seen from the question of the primary school student, he is going to write about his mother. At the beginning of the essay, his mother's hard work was depicted, and the ten words at the end were even more touching: "You grow up with me, and I will accompany you to old age." "The teacher's evaluation was excellent, and this evaluation was well deserved, and I really didn't expect elementary school students to be able to write such touching essays.
Elementary school students have limited knowledge, so they can only write about what is happening around them. In this essay, the elementary school student writes about his classmates. Although he is describing others, he has clear logic and strong language skills. At the end, the teacher even quoted the names of the two students, writing "Jin Se has fifty strings for no reason, one string and one pillar Si Hua Nian". I believe that such a composition teacher will give a full score. However, I also hope that primary school students can go further on this basis and write more meaningful content, not only stop at the present, but also read more books, gradually enrich themselves, improve their literary talents, and greatly benefit their future learning.
Primary school is considered to be the starting point of a learning career, with relatively simple knowledge and the main purpose of cultivating good study habits in students, and writing essays is one of them. Therefore, when it comes to composition, teachers do not demand too much from their students, including the word count.
One elementary school student wrote a lengthy essay that at first glance may seem a bit cluttered, but after reading it carefully, he realized that he was expressing his longing for his father and mother. This way of recording what happened through an essay is both a way to miss your parents and a way to ease your feelings of longing. People feel sad and helpless about this experience of the elementary school student, but they also hope that he can adjust his emotions and not be affected by it.
In fact, the quality of the essay is not only reflected in the number of words, but more importantly, whether the content has depth and whether it can resonate with readers. In contrast, the elementary school student performed quite well, and his short essay "Wait" attracted widespread attention, revealing deep sadness between the lines. In the 6-line essay, the last two lines of words are even more touching, "Dad, I don't want the rock sugar gourd across the road now", which made the teacher cry after reading it. This is a very good essay, and the performance of the elementary school student is commendable, and I hope he will continue to work hard.
However, there are also some elementary school students whose essays are relatively ordinary, and when other elementary school students are able to achieve perfect marks, this student's essay is difficult to even pass. The content of the essay is not high, and there are typos in it, which is obviously not serious enough and the attitude is more perfunctory. It can be seen that there is a large gap between primary school students. As teachers, it is necessary to take steps to close this gap and ensure that every primary school student is able to excel. In addition to teachers, parents need to be actively involved in this process.
In the process of primary school students' growth, parents are the people they trust the most, and the responsibility of education is also the obligation of parents. Taking on the role of a parent means having a responsibility and obligation to help primary school children thrive. By reading the essays of several primary school students, I believe that parents have also gained some inspiration in their hearts. They will combine their own children's compositions, compare them, assess their children's writing skills, and make adjustments accordingly.
If you don't understand something, parents can take the initiative to ask the teacher for advice and work together with the teacher. However, parents should also be careful not to rely solely on teachers, who have limited energy. Parents are expected to show a positive attitude while providing the best homeschooling for primary school students. Educational work should begin in the childhood of primary school students, relatively speaking, educating primary school students is relatively easy, as long as parents pay attention. Finally, I wish every elementary school student can get the best quality home education and create a higher level of composition.
Today's topic: What do you think parents can do to help elementary school students write higher quality essays?