Writing ideas: the beginning of the article:
The theme is elicited by describing a natural phenomenon, such as a rainbow after a storm.
Body: Describe a specific experience, such as a personal or other person's setback, difficulty, or challenge.
Describe the pain, confusion, and struggles you feel during the process.
Describe how, through hard work, perseverance, and a positive attitude, you can eventually overcome difficulties and achieve success or growth.
Highlight the wisdom, experiences, and lessons learned along the way, and their implications for the future.
Ending: Summarize the meaning of the whole experience with the meaning of "bitterness comes sweetly".
Readers are encouraged to maintain a positive attitude in the face of difficulties, believing that there will be a rainbow after the storm.
Express your hopes for the future.
Fan Wen: After experiencing wind and rain, you know sweetness.
Life is like a long journey, full of ups and downs and twists. Sometimes, we encounter stormy difficulties and setbacks, as if we have fallen into endless darkness. However, as the old saying goes, "Bitterness comes at a good time." "Only after going through the wind and rain can we really taste the sweetness.
I remember once facing a major failure. In an important exam, I failed and lost the scholarship I had always been proud of. At that moment, I felt extremely painful and confused, as if the whole world was working against me. I've asked myself countless times, "Why did I try so hard and fail?"”
However, it was in such a difficult situation that I learned to persevere and face it bravely. I began to re-examine my attitude and approach to learning, and constantly adjusted and improved. I told myself, "It's not scary to fail, it's scary to give up." "After countless nights of hard work and perseverance, I finally regained my scholarship and made even more progress in my studies.
This experience made me deeply realize that although the wind and rain are painful, it has taught us how to grow and be strong. It makes us cherish those beautiful moments and the joy of success even more. And when we overcome difficulties and setbacks, we will find that our hearts become more fulfilled and content.
There will always be ups and downs in life, but please believe: after every storm, there will be a rainbow. Let us learn to be resilient and brave in the midst of wind and rain, and humble and grateful in the midst of sweetness. Because only after experiencing the wind and rain can we truly taste the sweetness and beauty of life.
Teacher's wonderful comments:
This sample essay has a clear structure and full content, expressing in-depth thinking and perception of the theme of "experiencing wind and rain, knowing sweetness". The author illustrates the value of difficulties and setbacks through his own experiences, showing the qualities of tenacity and bravery. At the same time, the ending is far-reaching, inspiring and inspiring. Overall, this is a very good model essay that is worth learning and learning from.
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