Zou GuorongNo. Wuwei Zhai Lord, under the plum tree, Huoshan Dream Crane. He is a member of the Chinese Poetry Society. Honorary President of Shenzhen Poetry Society. Honorary President of China Beishe Poetry Society. He is a member of the Chinese Couplet Society and a member of the Calligraphy Committee of the China Couplet Society. Member of Guangdong Provincial Calligraphy Association and Shenzhen Calligraphy Association. He has published poetry and book collections such as "Plum Collection", "Wuwei Zhai Poetry Grass" and "Zou Guorong Calligraphy". A large number of calligraphy and poetry works have been published in newspapers, magazines and the Internet.
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New residence. Fan Dongxue (Hunan) The house is small and not luxurious, and it is home. Happy entertainment sunset, the same as the smoke.
Zou Guorong commented:Wang Chong said: "The mouth is in the clear words, and the pen is in the text." "If you are blind, you will open your eyes, and if you are deaf, you will hear your ears." This is a popular interpretation and figurative metaphor. The characteristics of this poem are clear words and explicit words, which can open people's eyes and ears. No obscure words, no obscure words. Straight to the point, "new home". But the joy, the satisfaction, the joy of the spirit overflowed. I think the author may be an old man, and if so, the meaning is still deep. Isn't the sunset a metaphor for old age, and the haze a metaphor for the evening scene?It's enough to be entertained and rewarded.
Matter. Liao Guohua (Hubei) is still confused by the world, and Taicang is unharmed and invisible. Pity the people in the world, and when you come to the inventory, you will meet Bingding. Zou Guorong commented:A poem of improvisation is like an untitled poem, and an untitled poem can also be a title, and an instant poem can be anything. The author's title is what is happening without saying what it is, and he has his own reasons, or he is not clear or unwilling to say. However, after a closer look at his works, it is still visible. The second sentence "Taicang is unharmed, and the ghost is invisible" has revealed its traces. This matter involves people's livelihood, and the person concerned has the ability to hide from the world. Since it is a habitual trick, the ghost is invisible, and it is natural to meet Bingding, so how easy is it to burn it?The poor thing is the common people after all. The author's pen is spicy, skillful, conceived, with a needle on his wrist, and the poem is readable.
Water tune song head: Mid-Autumn Festival to the moon.
Lou Lijian (Zhejiang) forgets the season, and collects it with the score. If it weren't for the eventful moon, tonight would be ordinary. Now the light shines on me, and I also exalt the puree, and I have done my best. When he was drunk, he fell asleep and was busy from then on.
Jiang Feng is really tired and tired of being crazy. Although there are three guests in the shadow, who knows that there are waves in the temples. How much dust scales, floating and falling is not about the circle, what is the matter with the low window?If you listen to the wind and rain, it is still cool. Zou Guorong commented:The lyricist uses the Mid-Autumn Festival to face the moon and pour out his feelings. In the words, you can feel the situation that the lyricist is depressed in the heart and secluded in the heart. Angry at the bright moon, sighing at the tired remains, disgusted with the mad heart, resentful of the ignorant moon. Sing, "If you listen to the wind and rain, it's still cool." The helpless self-deprecation.
Shangque rises according to the moon, invites the moon to drink together, and is busy after getting drunk. The first beat fades in, the second beat rises, and the third and fourth beats are assigned to the question. The tone of voice is calm, and the pulse is smooth. Words such as "eventful", "both", "me", "and", "drunken sleep", "busy" and other words are extremely witty and very in line with the theme of the word.
The next film turns to lyricism. There are grievances and resentments, and there are sighs and sighs. I know you, you know me, you don't know me, why bother to turn to the window?Even so, if the wind and rain, there is a sound and color, and there is still a coolness!The whole word, the rhythm is rigorous, the rhyme is mellow, and it is readable.
Butterfly Love Flowers, Mid-Autumn Festival.
Su Jun (Guangdong) remembers that the tent can be pushed in autumn, the west of the red banqiao, and the clear water flows fragrant snow. Ten miles of mountains screen a leaf, the moon is like a human face, and people are like the moon.
The world is difficult to complete, and it is easy to be missing, dancing and wandering, so as to celebrate the festival. The light in the arms is not extinguished, and there is affection to say goodbye ruthlessly. Zou Guorong commented:Rhythm, appropriate rhyme. The meaning of the word is to remember the person, and the word is smooth. There are descriptions and sayings, and the scene is clear. "The moon is like a human face and people are like the moon", the characters reflect each other, the scenes are blended, and the things are seen and thought of people, which is the sublimation of "the moon is born on the sea, and the end of the world is at this time".
After the film, the lack of the full moon is a metaphor for "the lack of the world", and the low appeal is heartfelt, especially the sound of the knot is stopped and the intention is not over, and the grace is in love.
Mid-Autumn Festival walking pen (new rhyme).
Zhang Zhijian (Shanghai) sat next to his mother and talked about his grandmother with his grandson. There are fewer wrinkles tonight, and Lai Yue touches more. Zou Guorong commented:Marking the new rhyme, in fact, the rhyme is flat water. This poem has only a few words, and it has seen the joy of family harmony on the night of the Mid-Autumn Festival. The moon is round, and the moon is happy. The words are ordinary, the meaning is implicit, and the joy is seen without words. There are fewer wrinkles tonight, and Lai Yue touches more. With this sentence, the poem is complete.
Night thoughts on duty. Jin Feng (Shanxi) tonight is still the same as last night, with a few stars and willows in the east. The hour hand returns to zero night and night, but it is difficult for people to go back to last night. Zou Guorong commented:This may be order, maybe it is reincarnation, maybe it is difference, maybe it is persistence, maybe it is helplessness, maybe it is contribution. The poetry is straightforward, the poetry is implicit, it comes from life, it is meticulous, and the poetry is delicious.
Fishing boats are in sight. Wang Zhiwei (Shandong) obliquely burns the red water bottom sky, and the birds in the reed flowers will sleep. Where did the fishing boat return to the evening, rocking over the bridge.
Zou Guorong commented:Familiarity. The last sentence is readable. The pen and ink are light, and the scenery is light. With smoke-like scenes, all three or five are complete.
Jinshan Dragon Courtyard south window visit.
Yang Ziyi (Guangzhou) The poor people dare not criticize the Dragon Garden, and the grass in the old rain blowing pond is green. The little bird also knows that the visitor is elegant, and the poem is enough to listen to the small tree.
Zou Guorong commented:Through the residence "Dragon Garden", it is said that "poor living" is humble. Borrowing old friends (old rain) for the rain, adding color to the residence, is the so-called big drive to Peng Sheng shine, not said but won to say. Praise the presence of friends with the aura of birds. The words are smooth, light and smart, and remarkable. Only the word "poem" can be changed, but it is not necessary to say poetry here, it is better to change it to a virtual word. Such as "light" and the like.
Colored stones in the mountains. Chujiachong (Hunan) Valley dark mountains are also dim in the rain, and the roadside colored stones ask the annual rings. Nuwa or mends the sky, and the spare tire is in Nomura for thousands of years.
Zou Guorong commented:The poet saw the colorful stones in the mountains, felt and sent, expressed his nostalgia with the parasite, and sighed at the experience of the spare tire. After reading it, it reminds people of the legend of Nuwa mending the sky, and the story of Cao Xueqin's "Stone Record" Nuwa mending the sky, leaving the stone in the mountain, and Huai Cai never encountered. The first sentence begins with the scene and describes a dark scene. The word "dark", the word "mystery", and the word "dark" are indeed rich and colorful, which shows the scene and its feelings. In this case, it is natural to derive the word "ask" in the sentence. Is it the colored stone asking about the earthly rings?Or is the poet asking about the rings of the colored stone here?In fact, you can do it, and everything you ask is reasonable. At this time, the poet had a whimsical thought, and his thoughts were wild, could it be the spare strange material that Nuwa left in this remote mountain village?This poem is written and inked, and the beginning and turn are one breath. The word "spare tire" is particularly new, especially the atmosphere of the times, especially the association, and especially the hope. The words "in Nomura" are also intriguing. reminds me of what is often said in "Kuaishou" and "Douyin": "The master is in the folk". How many "spare tires" have been in Nomura and in the rivers and lakes throughout the ages!I don't know if it's the regret of the "spare tire", or the regret of the "vehicle", or the regret of the owner. This poem is a good poem.
Xia Tan Prince Mountain (rhyme).
Hu Wenhan (Guangdong) When he came, it was hot outside the mountain, and the sound of the spring stopped when he was near. After the new rain in the forest, sit and listen to the symphony birds and cicadas. Zou Guorong commented:Wang Zishan Ecological Forest Park is located at the junction of Huadu District and Qingyuan City in Guangzhou, and consists of two parts: Furong Tourist Resort and Wang Zishan Forest Farm. The prince's mountain is verdant, the mountains are majestic, and the scenery is beautiful. This poem is the poet's summer trip to the place. The two sentences in the poem use contrasting brushwork to present the scenery of the prince's beautiful mountains and clear waters, and the pure world. Outside the mountain, it is "hot as steaming", and in the mountain, "the heat stops". The two realms are cut off. "Summer stops" is due to the "spring", which especially shows the tranquility of its scenery. The poet's comfortable and leisurely state of mind did not end here, but to appreciate a higher realm, that is, "after the new rain in the Lotus Forest, I like to sit and listen to the symphony birds and cicadas." The poet is in a relaxed mood, his pen and ink are idle, and he paints a picture of a quiet summer retreat in the mountains. The author is skillful in pen and ink, and he sees the real merit in understatement.
In April, the chrysanthemum is in full bloom.
Jiang Changdian (Hunan) clusters of golden have been piled up, and the frost and cold solar terms have come several times. It is difficult to be the Qingdi, and the autumn flowers bloom in summer.
Zou Guorong commented:The ninth month of the lunar calendar is the period when chrysanthemums bloom, and the ancients called it the chrysanthemum moon. But the season is still in summer, but the chrysanthemums in front of the poet's eyes are already in full bloom, and the clusters are like **. The frosty and dewy chrysanthemum moon has not yet arrived, and this chrysanthemum has completely ignored the timing of the solar terms. This makes the flower god also feel embarrassed, and it is difficult to control and order this chrysanthemum to play cards according to common sense. The poet is excited by the image in front of him, and then he is surprised, and then he turns to the discussion, and the end is looped. The whole poem is mellow and smooth. One morning and one night, I feel the charm of Bai Juyi's "Mountain Temple".
After the Spring Festival, there is something else to do.
Wang Hailiang (Hebei) returned and lingered a few times, and he didn't look at it carefully for a moment. Looking back at the old trees in front of the court, they have been accustomed to wind and rain and years.
Zou Guorong commented:This poem expresses the nostalgia and melancholy state of mind of the wanderer returning home and leaving home, especially the feelings of attachment and love for the elderly. The beginning sentence "return and return a few lingers" bluntly confides in the whereabouts and hearts of the wanderer. The children of the world all have such a state of mind, a hundred times to return home and a hundred times to be happy, a hundred times to leave home a hundred times to linger. Cheng sentence "A moment of smoke and light is not carefully seen." It is a supplement to the opening sentence, so that "several lingers" have a reason. The sentence "looking back at the old tree in front of the court" makes the emotion go deeper, and I am leaving home again, how can the old tree in the hometown not be nostalgic?This is talking about "old trees", which is actually a metaphor for "old people" and "elders". The concluding sentence "After the wind and rain and the years" makes the emotions extended, year after year, infinite melancholy and nostalgia. The beginning and end of this poem are natural and smooth, and there is an aftertaste.
Hometown alley (new rhyme) Wang Zhiwei (Shandong) mottled alley Liuqiao West, footsteps stone street high and low. If you want to find old dreams from the door number, your childhood memories have been fragmented.
Zou Guorong commented:The eye of this poem is in the word "seeking", and the ending is "fragmented". The brushstrokes are delicate, the emotions are indifferent, and the scenery is applied. Among them, "mottled" and "high and low", the vicissitudes of life are also very well paved for "fragmentation". Step by step is like a dream, and dreams are inevitably fragmented in the past.
There is a sense of the barricade wall.
Wang Shuncai (Sichuan) After all the vicissitudes of life, the green moss is mottled and dustless. Half a foot of the stone wall is still blocking horses, how many rules can be correct?Zou Guorong commented:The horse barrier is a kind of ancient military architecture. It has been derived from many place names, and many of them have been preserved so far, and some have become famous scenic spots. This poem travels through the horse barrage without saying the beautiful scenery of the horse barrage scenic spot, and directly captures the objects of the horse barrage to get excited, and directly rebukes the world with the essential effect of the horse barrage, and also sees the poet's ingenuity and sensitive brushstrokes. The beginning of the sentence says that the horse wall has gone through all the vicissitudes of life and still exists, and how many rules and precepts can be corrected by the history of the horse wall?The poem asks questions but does not answer, leaving the reader to ponder and reminisce. This poem borrows things to make a proposal, and takes its philosophical wisdom.
Jiangcun is the scene of Guo Dingqian (Chengdu) outing, why complain about the return of spring, Jiangcun is green and fertile in April. In order to add poetry, the egret flew to Noda.
Zou Guorong commented:The state of mind of leisure, the language of leisure, that is, the leisurely Jiangcun, naturally produces leisurely poems, giving people the enjoyment of leisure. This poem is described while talking, and it is very Tang-like. It is easy to come and become a good poem.
Overnight in Shigou Village.
Wang Zengqiang (Hebei) The dog barks in the mountain village month, and the rooster sings on the star. The flowers in the world are early, and the stream passes through the vestibule.
Zou Guorong commented:The poet uses the technique of white drawing to depict a picture of a rural spring night. The stars on the moon, the murmuring of streams, and the barking of chickens and dogs reflect the tranquility and tranquility of the rural night. The reason for all this should be "the flowers in the world are early", the poet did not say, but it can be inferred from the sentence that because of the early flowers, the poet came to the green and stayed in the village overnight, and his mood was good. At the beginning of tomorrow, the mountain village of Shaking Shadow is alarmed by the barking of dogs, the stars are moving, the moon and stars are scarce, the night is deep, the village chickens are crowing, and the sound of gurgling water also flows into the ears of the guests. The scenery is bright and the artistic conception is deep. Dharma.
Ren Yin's Qingming Festival miscellaneous feelings.
Song Caixia (Beijing) The tragic situation is a matter of time, and Xiao Xiao hurts my heart. The epidemic is urgent, and the country is deep. The guest mourns the mountain and flies tears, and the wind blows sweat and drips the forest. got the news in front of the screen, and I couldn't help it.
Zou Guorong commented:The whole poem is straightforward and sentimental, which shows the poet's compassion. The first couplet opened the pen to break the problem, and bluntly said that the tragedy was sad. The two-link triptych tells about current events and feels sad. The last sentence "unbearable moaning" has a tactful and deep effect. The tail couplet could have been used as the first couplet, and it was more tense to put it as the tail couplet.
Take a leisurely walk to enjoy the wisteria flowers of the fence around the stadium (Sichuan) who cut the purple clouds and strong, and hand the incense around the morning breeze. Mo teaches bees and butterflies to bully the owner, and I also spend the previous old madness.
Zou Guorong commented:This is the beginning of the inheritance and the combination of the law, to ask the beginning of the sentence, see the fence on the wisteria flowers blooming, such as the purple cloud from the nine heavens down, its momentum is dazzling and overwhelming, can not help but make people appreciate the masterpiece of nature, but the poet to question the pen, see the ingenuity of the pen. It starts with sight and inherits from the sense of smell. Take the exclusive reward to the next level. Such a color naturally provokes bees and butterflies to flock to each other, but don't forget that there is also me as the protagonist!So that the scenery has been sublimated and poetized. "Who cuts" and "Mo Yi" all transform the scene into artistic conception, good brushwork.
Title: "Books Blocking Windows" (Lonely Geese Entering the Group).
Chen Yihao (New Zealand) has two sideburns for half a bookworm, and once he woke up from a dream and sighed desolately. Pity the history of the millennium, when the beacon fire burns, the window is blocked.
Zou Guorong commented:This is a poem with a picture, which is very picturesque. The poem is very sophisticated. The contrast between things and things is strong, and the most undesirable things are still done, which shows the cruelty of reality and all kinds of helplessness, and also hints at the vigilance of people. A sigh and a pity show the poet's sad and pitiful emotions.
Ningbo Old Cadres Poetry Association Gu Yuri Picking Wind Zhang Xuefang (Zhejiang) He Yan is easy to get old, and the sea is wide. The spring tide of the valley rain rises, and the sky is green. Zou Guorong commented:The poet picks up the wind on a rainy day in the valley, and what he sees in front of him is the spring tide in all directions, the big field is green, and the beauty is charming. In the face of such beauty, he cross-examines that life is old, and it is the sea and the sky that he once recognizes. A few words, deep emotion. This poem is strangely conceived, the perception is pre-positioned, the scenery is closed, and the weight is light.
Air conditioning. Chujiachong (Hunan) is always better than the cold plum in spring, and the cool summer is in the autumn atmosphere. Dare to go against the emperor, and I will be warm and cold in the world. Zou Guorong commented:Poetry has always been a major carrier for poets to express their emotions. It uses external objects to describe and interpret its external sound and color characteristics and internal essential characteristics, and puts the author's emotions, wisdom and philosophy into it, so as to achieve the expression of his own voice and the manifestation of his character. In writing, he often adopts anthropomorphic techniques to express his feelings with things. This is the case with the poet's poem on air conditioning. Re-imitate the shape and function of the air conditioner, enhance its spirit, and endow it with charm. The tail couplet "dare to go against the emperor, and I will be warm and cold in the world." "It's really a witty saying, and it's precious to write about people who haven't written.
Jiangnan Spring. Wang Xianggu (Sydney) Jiangnan spring rain apricot blossoms red, turtle Zhu fishing song resounding blue sky. Daiwa pink wall grass green, double flying swallow small bridge east.
Zou Guorong commented:Cutting "Spring Rain", "Apricot Blossom", "Yuanzhu", "Fishing Song", "Blue Sky", "Daiwa", "Pink Wall", "Fangcao", "Feiyan" and "Small Bridge", which are the most characteristic scenes of Jiangnan Spring, describe Jiangnan Spring, so that the poem is naturally most successful. Then use the technique of white drawing, only describe without saying, image thinking, and natural pictures, so that the poem is more perfect. It is a commonplace saint "full of peach trees, windy and waterfront." The willow yin road is curved, and the warblers are next to each other. "The realm of slenderness is also.
Quarry rock before nostalgia.
Cao Xinpin (Guangdong) has a long road ahead of quarrying, and the man is seven feet high. didn't change its name to cyclamen, what happened to Yelang. The sword should be painted with mountains and greens, and the water is fragrant all over the field. Talented people are really useless, and it is difficult to ask the moonlight through the ages.
Zou Guorong commented:A work of nostalgia. The author collected the special places of "Quarry Rock", "Yelang" and "Dangtu", selected the special titles of "man" and "cyclamen", and listed the special words of "talented" and "moonlight" to describe Li Bai, which made Li Bai's image and spirit emerge and played the effect of nostalgia and mourning. "Talented people are really useless, and it is difficult to ask the moonlight through the ages. This question makes the poetry more timeless and long-lasting.
Linggu Temple Yang Ziyi (Huizhou) Mountain Tibetan Essence House Tree Floating Smoke, live up to the first Zen of the emperor. Dehua cold insects listen to the sound of the Buddha, and the flowers are dipped in the rain and sleep in the pool. Purple Mountain Zizi Wang Qi, Linggu Tower Ling Mo Tian. The verses often hear that birds are also Buddhas, and people listen to the words of birds and live forever.
Zou Guorong commented:Linggu Temple is located in the southeast slope of Zijin Mountain, Xuanwu District, Nanjing City, was founded in the 14th year of Tianjian in Nanliang (515), and was originally named Kaishan Temple. Zhu Yuanzhang of the Ming Dynasty gave the name of Linggu Zen Temple and named it the first Zen forest in the world. This poem is deeply sage, "the words are very straightforward, and the thinking is profound." Suddenly, you meet a ghost, such as seeing the heart of the Tao. The song of the clear stream, the yin of the pine. One guest is a lotus wood, and one guest listens to the piano. Temperament goes, and it is wonderful. When it comes to the sky, it is a sound of joy. "It's a wonderful reality. In the poem, every sentence of Zen, every sentence of Zen, in the middle of the emptiness, all phases of refuge, birds are also Buddhas, and people are immortal. It really "lives up to the reputation of the first Zen of the emperor". Poetic and calm, the pen is old-fashioned.
Water Dragon Yin, Gui Mao Gu Yu Zhang Yi (USA) Three spring wild horses step on the sunny light, and the peak is suddenly at the peak. The begonias are old, the peonies are beautiful, and the jade face is drunk. Carefully distinguish the heart of the flower, the gold silk greasy powder, and the dense vermilion top. Wait for the galaxy to gradually rise, slightly lift the moon, listen to the cry, good media.
There is no water, and the tide is lingering. Only Saburo, wonderful love. Yushu Zhengyu, Heqing Field, Township Guan Nai. Even if there is an unknown, it is difficult to compete with the wild medicine. Spring is about to return, the romance is broken, and the heavenly fragrance is respected.
Zou Guorong commented:This word takes the valley rain as the theme, the spring return as the context, and the peony and the owl as the phenology, interpreting the seasonal scenery and weather of the valley rain, the scenery is arranged in an orderly manner, and the rhetoric is graceful. The arrangement of the upper and lower rung is reasonable, and the meaning of the words is smooth. The cries of the cathars in late spring and early summer, when the flowers are falling. Jin Ren Zhao Bingwen's "Man Ting Fang" has "common peonies open and wait, monopolize broken, and valley rain is romantic." It is also in harmony with the meaning of this word.
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