High school students' full-score essay became popular The opening highlight has become the focus, and this essay must have a high score!
The high school student's full-score essay "Fire" emphasizes this point at the beginning, but the test score is not high.
When it comes to writing essays, elementary and middle school students tend to struggle a lot. However, the composition has always been with us, and writing a good composition seems to be a top priority, especially since the composition has a high score in the foreign language test, accounting for almost half of the coefficient.
Instruct students to write essays step by step. Starting with image composition in primary school, it gradually transitions to narrative writing in the lower grades and discussion teaching in the upper grades. This process is getting deeper and more complex. Through this learning process, students feel the charm of composition and realize that writing a high-quality essay requires logical and deep thinking before putting pen to paper, just like scientific writing.
Some time ago, a sensational high school student's essay "Planting Lotus Flowers Without Shallowness and Depth" spread. At the beginning of the article, a quote from Yasunari Kawabata's "Snow Country" naturally leads to the scene of buying flowers, and cleverly leads to the topic"Adaptation"。The text revolves around the central theme. A large number of citations subtly enrich the content of the article, support the argument, and make the overall structure of the article compact and complete.
The language in the essay is natural and fluent, the idea is clever, and the introduction and conclusion of the essay stand out among many college entrance examination essays. The high school student's writing style is truly outstanding, showing great writing skills.
However, there are also netizens who have different opinions on this article. They say that the article relies too heavily on quotations and gives the impression of being scattered, or that the article does not fully express its emotions. But you must know that this is a conditional essay in the examination room, and the time is pressing, and it is not easy to write so many essays in a short period of time. Therefore, when evaluating it, it is important to be aware of its limitations and not to confuse it with the level of professional writers.
Learning a language is not an easy task for high school students, especially when writing essays in school takes a lot of time. Some students can't write a good essay after a few years of study, which means that writing an essay is quite difficult.
So, how can students write good essays? First of all, it's important to accumulate footage. Reading more books, listening to teachers teaching composition, and developing writing skills can all help improve your writing skills. Secondly, it is also important to write neatly. When the teacher corrects the essay, the neat handwriting is easier for the teacher to understand, and it also increases your chances of being graded.
Also, one factor that affects the level of writing is ability. Some students have a special talent for writing and have shown excellent writing skills since elementary school.
However, talent cannot be cultivated for life. Acquired efforts can improve the level of writing, mainly to enrich the accumulation of students' experience. Less gifted students can improve their writing by working on developing a sense of language, mood, and imagination. Students with limited ability can gradually improve their writing skills by participating in composition training classes and receiving guidance from professional teachers.
In other words, it is not difficult for high school students to write essays, but the important thing is the accumulation and practice in daily life. I hope that you will be mentally prepared, practice your essays, and improve your Japanese. Japanese accounts for a large part of the test score, and the essay occupies an important place in the Japanese language test, and it is very important to write a good essay to improve the overall score. In important exams such as university entrance exams, the level of composition will determine the ranking among thousands of candidates. Therefore, candidates should recognize the importance of composition and strive to improve their writing skills to lay a solid foundation for future development.
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