Narratives that focus on memorization should grasp the key points and highlight the theme. If the details are properly used and used well, the article will have a clear theme and highlight the key points. If you don't prioritize everything and cover everything, the article will be monotonous and bland, and it won't move the reader.
The content of an article, which should be described in detail and which should be brief, is determined by the topic of the article. It is the main focus of the article that has a lot to do with the topic of the article, and when writing, it should be "detailed description"; On the other hand, what has little to do with the theme of the article is the secondary focus of the article, and when writing, it is natural to adopt a "brief narrative". From the topic of the article, we can judge the light and heavy, the light point should be briefly described, and the next pen should be "cherished ink like gold", and even lightly brought over; The important points should be described in detail, and the pen should be "like splashing ink", and even so thick that it can't be dissolved. The famous works since ancient times, in the expression of the articles, are well tailored, pay attention to the arrangement of detailed description. If you want to "apply light makeup and glamorous makeup", it is the only trick to be dense and detailed.
If you can distinguish the size of the article, you can calmly arrange the "detail" and "omission" of the narrative. Grasping the essentials of the detailed and brief description of the article, on the one hand, can greatly highlight the effect of clear master-slave and vivid theme, so that the article appears vigorous and perfect to read; On the other hand, there will also be a flurry of rhetoric. When the details are mastered, the magic of the article is born.
For example: Take "Water Margin" as an example - in this classical**, there are "Wu Song Fights the Tiger" and "Li Kui Kills the Tiger". Wu Song's fight against the tiger was purely accidental, and it was not necessary to fight the tiger. Although he only killed a tiger, in order to highlight the image of a shrewd and brave hero, the author used the technique of "detailed narration" to make Wu Song have a perfect appearance. As for Li Kui, his personality is rude, he killed a total of four tigers, killing tigers and fighting tigers is nothing new, the author will explain it with a "brief narrative".
Detailed
Detailed narration is detailed narration, which refers to the use of elaborate strokes to lay out the narrative in order to highlight the theme.
For example: Take "I Lost" as an example-
The first corner was over and I was in first place for the time being. The second corner passed again, my ** started soft, slowed down slightly, and suddenly a passionate shout came into my ears, I saw the classmates on the stage all stood up, my heart was about to jump out, for the honor of the class, I want to win the first! I'm going to crimp the line! I swung my arms so hard that I almost fell. The shouts of cheering are getting more and more urgent, and I can't hear who is cheering for whom on the sports field. There was still fifty meters left, I found that the runner behind was panting and chasing, aggressive, I tried my best to get rid of him, but my feet didn't obey, I gritted my teeth, and I couldn't wait to run to the finish line in one step! Suddenly, the runner who was following closely behind sped past ......... like the windAt the end of the race, I finished second. ”
Conclusion: Since the theme is that "I" lost this race, the "I" who ran second became the object of "detailing", and the runner who ran first place understated it and used "abbreviation", so that the master-slave relationship of the article is very clear.
2. Brief description
Abridged narration is a brief narrative, which refers to a summary or brief narrative technique to lay out the narrative, and gently carry it in a few words, so as to play the role of a foil. For example, take Beethoven and I, for example
I first met him a year ago, on my birthday, my mother bought me a copy of Beethoven's biography, and since then I have fallen in love with this ** family who does not give in to bad luck.
I remember one time, I failed the social science exam, I hid in my room alone and cried, and I yelled hysterically. Mom stood aside, not saying a word, just turning on the CD of the Symphony of Destiny, and the whole room reverberated with passionate and tragic music, as if Beethoven's power to break through difficulties could be heard. Slowly, I calmed down," I ......A week later, I was holding the perfect test paper and looking at the statue of Beethoven on the piano table, muttering my joy, when the pastoral symphony sounded, and I seemed to revel in the beauty of nature and the joy of success.
For more than two years, Beethoven has accompanied me through difficult times on the journey of my life, and I am glad that I have such a trustworthy friend. This is the story of Beethoven and me. ”
Conclusion: In the article, "over the past two years, on the journey of life, there have been difficult hurdles again and again", and one stroke has been lightly skipped; The relationship between one of the "failed social examinations" and Beethoven's music is described in great detail.
Conclusion
From the above introduction, we can roughly distinguish the role of "detailed description" and "brief description" in narrative writing. "Detailed narration" refers to a detailed description of the material that is closely related to the theme and can highlight the expression of the theme. "Brief description" refers to a brief description of the secondary materials that express the main idea or materials that have little to do with the content of the theme.
For the same thing, because the theme of the expression is different, the focus of the detailed description is different. When actually writing, you must determine the theme and direction of your writing, so that the two techniques of "detailed description" and "brief description" can be used.