The premiere of Happy Scroll Changle City has few laughs, the main line is chaotic, and the bench

Mondo Sports Updated on 2024-02-11

Title: "Happy Roll Changle City" has low laughter, the main line is lost, the bench unit is embarrassed, and the fierce material is interpreted!

Recently, "Happy Roll Changle City" premiered on Tencent**, which caused heated discussions among netizens for a while. However, this costume light comedy starring Ma Tianyu and Bu Guanjin did not seem to make the audience laugh as expected, but instead made the bench unit stumble a little and tremble.

A joke convention that lacks a laugh

Judging from my personal experience of chasing dramas, this work can actually make people sit on pins and needles, in addition to the lack of laughter that can make people laugh out of their abdominal muscles, it is even more embarrassing. This can't help but make people wonder if the screenwriters have hidden the secrets of comedy creation in some ancient treasure box. Laugh, how did this thing become more difficult to do than future technology?

For example, the plot has come to the point where the male protagonist wants to sell the female protagonist's school district house, and it is estimated that even the ancient audience was confused. The concept of school district housing can also take root in ancient Chang'an City, which is too avant-garde! It's a pity that the screenwriter only dabbled in this point roughly and missed the opportunity to play. If you play the concept of this school district room more uniquely, maybe you can laugh so much that Sun Xiaochuan has to give a thumbs up.

The main story is lost in the big maze

Regarding the main story, this drama is like a lost cat, swaying from side to side, not knowing which direction to go. After watching the first four episodes, I can't help but feel that the plot is reversed, like a cat-and-mouse game that can't catch the tail.

Take episodes 3 and 4 as examples, it seems to revolve around the school district house where the male protagonist wants to sell the female protagonist, but this main line seems too erratic. If this school district house can be deeply excavated and developed into an incredible joke, it may be able to pull the whole show out of the embarrassing quagmire.

The character design is not high enough

In terms of casting, although Ma Tianyu is mature when playing a disabled person, his contribution to comedy elements seems to be a little inadequate. The choice of actors is crucial for a comedy work, after all, not every actor can hold the laugh.

As for the problem of the similarity of the supporting characters, it is like the princess of the Western Regions and her entourage, it is simply a copy-and-paste mistake. In a courtyard sitcom, the characters should be diverse and distinctive, and the audience should not feel like they have seen the same person change different costumes in different scenes.

Summary: The bench unit had to refuel

Overall, "Happy Scroll Changle City" makes people a little off the chain in terms of laughter and the main line. Comedy works are like a lively party, without ** and wine, how can everyone be high? I hope that Tencent**'s bench unit can seize the time to correct the main line, improve the laughter, and let this comedy party find the momentum to move forward again. Otherwise, the bench would be a bit shaky.

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