Sima Nan: South Korea has upgraded cabbage into chips, can we make chips into cabbage?
The mystery of the rising price of Korean cabbage.
The price of Korean cabbage is incredibly high. The peak of a cabbage is 62 pieces per kilogram, while in China, the wholesale price of cabbage is only 10 cents per kilogram. Koreans love cabbage more than we can imagine. They eat pickles at every meal, and the raw material of pickles is cabbage. So, why do Koreans process cabbage into something so expensive? According to Lee, there is a peasant association in South Korea that controls the manufacturing and distribution of agricultural products throughout the country. It has several million members, 1,800 acquisition locations, and more than 300 sales outlets. The price of Korean cabbage can only be set after the approval of the farmers' association. The Farmers' Association established a branch in Korea to support the development of agriculture. Farmers in South Korea, like their customers, are suffering. Due to the purchase of agricultural products, the monopoly of Korean agricultural products in the market has led to the monopoly of its agricultural products in the market, thus losing the competitiveness of the market.
The ills of the Korean Agricultural Cooperative.
South Korea's agricultural cooperatives, which were originally designed to be managed by pooling scattered farmers, have changed. Unlike agricultural cooperatives in Japan, agricultural cooperatives in South Korea enforce participation by farmers in the name of "working for the welfare of farmers." But if an organization forces you to do things in the name of "for your benefit", then we should think more about the reasons than pick and choose. But in South Korea, you have to do what the farmer cooperatives do, or you won't be able to enter the city, because the agricultural cooperatives have the legal rights, so they can kick you out of the market at any time. It is precisely because of this particular situation that South Korea's agriculture has become worse after Yoon Suk-yeol came to power, so that the state of South Korea's agriculture has become even worse.
Problems faced by South Korea.
South Korea's exports to China have always been the foundation of its founding, but for the first time in 31 years, it has run a deficit with China. South Korea's exports to China fell by 7.7 percent compared with the same period last year, and the deficit reached 18 billion yuan. This is a huge blow to South Korea's economy. China's rapid economic development has hindered South Korea's agricultural exports to China. China has its own technology, cars, photovoltaic panels, batteries, and even shipbuilding, replacing South Korean goods into the world. In stark contrast, South Korea has not found a cheap alternative to China, such as urea, which is used in industry. South Korea currently relies on 98% of China's urea imports.
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The mystery of the rising price of Korean cabbage.
The price of Korean cabbage is very expensive, unbelievably expensive. A cabbage can be sold for up to 62 pieces a kilogram, while in China, the wholesale price of cabbage per kilogram is only 10 cents. Koreans love cabbage more than we can imagine. They drink pickles at every meal, and the main ingredient of pickles is choy sum. So, why is Korean cabbage so expensive?
Mr. Lee said South Korea has a strong peasant association that controls manufacturing and distribution throughout the country. The Farmers' Association has several million members, 1,800 purchasing outlets and more than 300 sales outlets throughout the country. The price of Korean cabbage is subject to the approval of the farmers' association, and then it is decided. The Farmers' Association has also set up a special financial institution, which has played a huge role in supporting the development of Korean agriculture. However, the monopoly of peasant associations has led to extremely high prices for agricultural products in South Korea, and a large amount of arable land and arable land are occupied.
The dilemma faced by the Korean Agricultural Cooperative.
South Korea's agricultural cooperatives, which were originally used to organize scattered farmers, have gone sour. Unlike Japanese agricultural cooperatives, South Korean agricultural cooperatives practice coercive management of farmers, claiming to be working for the benefit of farmers. But we have to be vigilant that all organizations that think we're good people should ask more about their true intentions, rather than being involved. In South Korea, farmer cooperatives do whatever they want, otherwise they won't be able to enter the market. Because the agricultural cooperatives have the legal power, they can kick you out of the market at any time. It is precisely because of this unique environment that South Korea's agriculture has developed to the point where it is today, and this situation has become even worse after Yoon Suk-yeol came to power.
Problems faced by South Korea.
South Korea has been dependent on exports with China, and this is the first time in 31 years that it has run a deficit with China. South Korea's exports to China fell by 7.7 percent compared with the same period last year, and the deficit reached 18 billion yuan. This is a huge blow to South Korea's economy. The rapid growth of China's economy has put tremendous pressure on South Korea's agricultural exports. China is technologically stepping out of its own path, from cars to photovoltaic cells to shipbuilding, and is gradually replacing global brands made in South Korea. In stark contrast, South Korea is unable to provide China with cheap products, such as urea for industrial use. South Korea currently relies on China for 98% of its urea needs.
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