Review Title:At the moment of life and death, this Jiang University student made a decisive move!
Commentator: Wang Xuming
Let's take a look at the excerpt from the original text first: "You see that so many of us are concerned about you, you tighten your hands, and you tighten your hands .......""At the beginning of the story, the scene is brought out in conversational language. (Click here to view the original article).
Look again: After dinner on January 15, Zhou Yuhan, who came home from winter vacation, accompanied his father out for a walk, planning to see the night view of Chongqing. They walked along the Jialing River, but before they knew it, they walked late, and after missing the last train from Huanghuayuan Station of Light Rail Line 2, the father and son decided to cross the river on foot through the Huanghuayuan Bridge. Such a background introduction seems to pull the reader to the riverside, and the warm scene of father and son comes to mind, which paves the way for the father and son to save people in the following.
There is also a scene of saving people: After Zhou Yuhan and his father approached, they found that it was a young girl standing outside the bridge crying, holding her hand on the railing. "My dad walked in front, and suddenly he stepped in front of the girl and hugged her, and I immediately stepped forward and hugged her other arm and began to comfort her and calm her down.
The author is paired with **and** on ***, and it is obvious that the author's picture consciousness is very conscious.
Why should the best stories of our time have a sense of imagery? Because of the Internet era, the mass media has become more and more dissatisfied with written expression, and the new wave of **, especially the short **, is super receptive to the general audience. This is the reason why short ** like Douyin has become popular. Propaganda workers should take the initiative to seize such a momentum and let positive energy occupy the high ground of short-term goods, rather than giving up short-term and only selling goods and vulgar and strange talks.
How do you make the best stories visual? This requires a lot of skills, such as environmental description, character description and scene description, and there are dialogues, appearances, actions, psychological descriptions, etc. in character description, note that this is not writing, but description, there is a difference between the two. In addition, the author must have a certain degree of imagination, and the scenes described form a picture, laying a solid foundation for the production. For example, the difference between writing stories now and people writing stories in the past is that writing stories now is equivalent to writing a shooting script, and the author should not only be satisfied with beautiful words when writing, but also form pictures in his mind, which is equivalent to eating two things, or eating more than one thing.
As for how to use good shooting skills to shoot text stories in the form of short **, Wang Xuming's studio team has good exploration and experience, and we can go deep into the school for further exchanges. To tell a good campus story, you must not only tell it well with your mouth, but also present it well with a short **. At present, the capacity of schools at all levels and types should be improved in this regard.
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