"A Trip I Traveled with My Mom" Writing Tips
My Trip with Mom can be a real trip, or an illusory trip, but it must be a meaningful trip. The essay should be well-organized and have a clear topic. You can write about environmental protection, you can also write about beautiful scenery, and of course, you can also write about the human environment. Let's analyze how to write "My Trip with Mom" from the three questions to answer when writing an article.
First, in the **?
The first question is easier to write, right? You just have to tell the reader that you're going on a ** trip with your mom. For example, there is one trip that I will never forget, that is, my mother and I went to the Liujiang River to play.
2. What to write?
1. You can write a little preparation for your trip. For example, my mother said that I would go to Panlongshan Park early tomorrow morning, and I was a little excited tonight and couldn't sleep, so I got up and tidied up my bags.
2. Travel is to see the landscape and humanities, so the second point is that you can write about the beautiful scenery, there are crystal clear water, beautiful and fragrant flowers, green trees, mountains, pagodas, these we can expand to write.
3. Write humanities, you can write people's inscriptions in scenic spots, or you can write about lively **.
If you are writing about environmental protection, you can write about how the scenic spot is polluted, how there is more garbage, and so on. How did you do that? Are you picking up garbage for someone? What does your ideal destination look like?
3. Why is it written?
All articles tell the reader why you are writing this article.
For example, Panlong Mountain Park is so beautiful, I will definitely bring more friends to play next time.
For example, this scenic spot is going to change, if it is still so dirty, no one will travel here in the future.
Reflections Writing Tips
A reflection is an imaginary image of light shining on a calm water. The imaging principle follows the principle of plane mirror imaging.
Let's talk about how to write this article according to the three questions to be answered when writing an article:
First, in the **?
The first question of this article is relatively easy to write: you just need to tell the reader where to see the "reflection".
2. What to write?
1. You can write about the environment of the reflection and the mood you feel when you find the reflection, and of course, you can also write about the mood of the people around you who see the reflection.
2. Focus on the appearance of the reflection: for example: high-rise buildings, like a mirage (shèn) building, originally refers to the seaside or desert, due to the reflection and refraction of light, the air or the ground appear illusory towers and castles. Now it is more of a metaphor for ethereal things.
3. You can look back at what the reflection looked like, so you can write that the city is developing very fast.
3. Why is it written?
Write your feelings about the reflection, such as: When I saw this reflection, I realized that Liuzhou City was so beautiful and magnificent, and it was developing so fast.
Example of writing "A Trip I Spent with My Mother" (including "Reflection"):
A trip I took with my mom to the Liujiang River made me unforgettable, and the mountains, the water, and the reflections are all fresh in people's minds.
One night, my mother suddenly told me that she was going to take me to Panlongshan Park the next day, and I was very happy, because I had already heard that the scenery of the park was not ordinary, and some people said that it was simply a must. I don't believe in other people's nonsense, I only believe that seeing is believing.
Early the next morning, my mother and I came to Panlongshan Park as promised. Although it was early spring, the weather was still a little cold, but as soon as I entered the gate of the park, I was attracted by the greenery of the park, the mountains were green, the water was green, and the trees were even greener. This is compared to the scenery of my hometown in the north, at this time the north is desolate, and Panlongshan Park is full of spring.
1. The mountain of Panlong Mountain.
As soon as I walked into Panlong Mountain Park, the cliffs of Panlong Mountain attracted my attention, and when I looked up, there was a towering pagoda on the mountain. This layered pagoda is not only magnificent, but also makes people feel that the mountain and the sky are together, as if the aura of this mountain is full, and the fairy spirit is still spiritual.
From the foot of the mountain to the top of the mountain, the whole Panlong Mountain is green, there are ancient trees on the mountain, there are thousands of years old vines, the flowers are like stars, beautiful and dazzling. At this time, Panlong Mountain is just like a huge flower plate by the Liujiang River, which makes people intoxicated, lingering, and happy.
Halfway up the mountain, my mother and I felt as if we had entered the primeval forest, we saw not only the dense trees, but also the scattered grass at the bottom of the trees, and the dragonflies flying in the distance, the birds singing, the beautiful and melodious birdsong was like a symphony of nature to people, which made people suddenly feel relaxed and happy, and the imagination was full of happiness.
My mother and I climbed to the top of Panlong Mountain step by step, although we were a little tired, but when we saw a sunrise in the east, our fatigue disappeared without a trace in an instant. The fiery sunrise seems to bring new life to everything in the mountains, and even the rocks in the mountains seem to be vivid. Looking into the distance, it seems that the mountains and waters of Liuzhou are all in our eyes, and the Liujiang River, which bends like nine intestines, surrounds Liuzhou City, and Liuzhou City is like a baby lying in the arms of a mother.
Spring has taken steps to approach us, at this time is also Liuzhou full of redbud budding season, recall the past Liuzhou bauhinia blooming scene, a few days I now under the Panlong Mountain under Liuzhou City will be a sea of thousands of purple flowers.
Before I could enjoy enough of the scenery from the top of the mountain, my mother urged me to go down the mountain, which made me very helpless.
When I returned to the bottom of the mountain, I found that Panlong Mountain is actually a sister mountain, and there is a pagoda on the top of Panlong Mountain that is a little shorter, and there is a waterfall under the pagoda that flows straight down and pours into the turquoise Liujiang River.
2. The water (reflection) of Panlong Mountain
Seeing the Liujiang River under the waterfall, we noticed that the water of Panlongshan Park was so magical, and the lake surface that was so small that it could not be smaller was actually integrated into the sparkling Liujiang River, thus becoming incomparably wider and endless. What's even more amazing is that there is a reflection of tall buildings on the calm lake, which makes people look like seeing a mirage in the desert, and the entire Liuzhou City becomes lifelike at this time.
Seeing the reflection in the water, I realized how beautiful and magnificent Liuzhou City was. In the reflection, we can also enjoy the scene of traffic on Wenhui Bridge and Wenchang Bridge. The high-rise buildings seem to write the changes of the times in Liuzhou City, and when I see the hurried footsteps of the people on the bridge, I can no longer hide my excitement, so I asked my mother to use my mobile phone to help me take pictures of the beautiful reflections.
My mother told me that there were not so many high-rise buildings in Liuzhou in the past, and that Liuzhou was still a dilapidated city before the 80s of the last century, and only the Liujiang Bridge and the Liuzhou Iron Bridge connected the north and south urban areas, so the traffic was very inconvenient. After the reform and opening up, Liuzhou has become an important heavy industry city in China, and Liuzhou is developing rapidly at the rate of creating a new Liuzhou city every five years. Therefore, Liuzhou is not only charming, industrial development is also quite amazing, now Liuzhou has the magic of Wuling cars running around the world, there are also vigorous Liugong machinery in the continuous expansion of the international market, even with the aroma of the earth Liuzhou snail flour is also well-known at home and abroad. Now Liuzhou not only has many bridges, but also one is more beautiful than the other, one of which also imitates the construction mode of Chengyang wind and rain bridge in Sanjiang County, which is very atmospheric and dazzling.
A small reflection made my mother speak so magically, but from the reflection of the landscape, it fully corroborated my mother's statement, the forest of buildings is not only towering into the sky, but also colorful, white, yellow, and golden, each one is magnificent enough. In the clear water, I also saw many golden fish swimming among the tall buildings, and they looked very leisurely.
I took a serious look at the reflection in the water, and I believed in the beauty and richness of Liuzhou, and I believed that Liuzhou had caught up with the pace of development of the times.
3. The people of Panlong Mountain.
After seeing the beauty of the mountains and water of Panlong Mountain, I think this should be a tourist mecca in Liuzhou, and there must be a lot of people who come here to play.
Just when I thought of the tourists in Panlong Mountain, my mother told me that it is full of tourists on holidays, and sometimes it is even difficult to take a step. While talking, I looked around and found that there were many people in Panlongshan Park today, some were exercising, some were playing, some were singing and dancing, and some were looking for beautiful scenery to take pictures. Not far away, I also found a young couple taking wedding photos, they were young and sunny, and they were happily showing their affection under the sun.
It can be seen that Panlong Mountain Park is not only beautiful in terms of mountains and waters, but also beautiful people. My mother asked me if I wanted to come to Panlongshan Park next time, and I said that next time I would bring my classmates and friends to play.