[Seal carving evaluation and correction].
Feng IsopingWho in the clouds sent the brocade book
Reprinted by Xia Yu. Mr. Feng Equaling took the official seal of the Northern and Southern Dynasties of France, which is quite ancient, the knot is stretched, the lines pursue the brushwork and are vigorous, and the layout is more decent. If this seal can be slightly adjusted in terms of the harmony and unity of the character and in some details, the seal will be more natural and "potential".
The adjustments are:1. The upper horizontal line of the word "cloud" extends to the right, and the vertical line on the right becomes shorter, changing from real to virtual. Avoid duplication with the shape of the word "send". Second, the right vertical line of "in", the lack of meaning of the line can change the sense of stuffiness of the word "in". Third, the overall fine-tuning of the right side of the word "who" makes the overall direction of the right side of the seal unified. Fourth, break the symmetry of the glyph of "send". Fifth, the "brocade" word gold part of the defective treatment, to reduce the upper left corner of the print to the visual overattraction. The "towel" part of the horizontal line is broken and connected to the pen to prevent misreading. 6. Add a vertical line to the left side of the word "book" so that the vision will no longer extend and change the visual direction of the area. 7. Shorten the length of a diagonal line on the right side of the word "come", so that the word "come" is consistent with the word "book". 
Reviewer:Xia Yu (member of the Sea Knife Association, member of the Sea Printing Society, member of the Seal Carving Professional Committee of the Shanghai Calligraphy Association).