I have him in my eyes besides you
In my impression, Jieshi Primary School, Yunan Tianzhong and Yuhu Road Primary School are all cradles for cultivating young writers of children's songs, and many excellent children's songs have been created. In fact, Shuanghekou Primary School and Lianhua Primary School are also good. There's a song called "Only You and No Him in My Eyes", and I'm going to say: "I have him in my eyes besides you".
Only a strict teacher can produce a high apprentice. In my impression, Shuanghekou Primary School Dou Biyou made his debut by writing stories, and now he has tutored unexpected good works of children's songs. The "Tile" of Geng Yuyun, a classmate he tutored, is eye-catching:
The small tiles are like heroes, and the cornices climb the wall. Protect the house as armor, we are not afraid of wind and rain.
Tiles are commonplace, but they have a discerning eye for poetry that no one else is aware of. A good "hero", the nature, characteristics and role of ceramic tiles are exhausted. The imagery is bold and quirky yet very appropriate. Wonderful! Jing Xiaoqiang engaged in the creation and teaching of children's rhymes earlier, and tutored some good works, such as "Little Grass Crying" and "Dandelion" in this issue, which grasped the characteristics of the object of the song, and the image was vivid and interesting.
I don't know Teacher Chen Xiaolu from Lianhua Primary School, but it doesn't matter, I can get to know him through my works. The nursery rhymes she tutors are good at description, can grasp the characteristics of the object, and pay attention to the accuracy and condensation of words. Such as the tutoring of Mu Siying's "Little Duck":
The duckling, quack, yellow and yellow, with a flat beak. The red paws of the feet, like oars, are paddling in the water.
There are duck calls and water sounds, yellow and red colors, images, and metaphors, which are really vivid and vivid. The same is true of "Little Eyes", a student of Lu Yang she tutored:
Small eyes, watery, blinking, shiny. You can distinguish between red and black, good and bad, and you can distinguish everything.
Use verbs and adjectives to describe the eyes, write about the function and function of the eyes, and derive their meanings. For commonplace things, it is good and not easy to write things that are different from others.
As the saying goes, "one strong soldier will be a nest", which fully illustrates the important role of leaders and mentors in the organization.
The students' works are good, and the military merit medal is half that of the tutor. In addition to the teacher's discernment, he can also selflessly dedicate himself to transfer his wisdom to students free of charge, or modify and polish the students' works, or eliminate flaws and cure diseases for the students' works. Doing so is hard work, but it's even greater. Dedication is not only about energy, but also about wisdom. The spirit of the red candle is embodied in the three-foot podium, and it is also reflected in amateur life.
I have him in my eyes besides youNursery rhyme tutors, I hope that this "he" will be you next.
Qi Wankai).