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"Pessimism and Optimism" essay guide
Qiu Qingping, Liuyang No. 1 Middle School
Yale-China Liuyang No. 2 Middle School, Zhang Guoguang.
Read the material below and write as required (60 marks).
In the summer of 2023, Peking University professor Yao Yang said to the graduating Peking University students at the graduation ceremony: "Optimists win the future, and pessimists win the present." ”
What kind of associations and thoughts do the above materials trigger in you?Please write an essay that is relevant to reality and expresses your opinion.
Requirements: choose the right angle, determine the idea, clarify the style, and draft the title;Don't copy, don't plagiarize;Do not divulge personal information;No less than 800 words.
Writing guidance. This is a speculative relational task-driven essay that candidates can learn fromThree aspectsComplete the review task.
The first is to review the materials. This material is the affectionate message of the professor of Peking University to the students at the graduation ceremony, which is not only a middle-aged person's life insight, but also an elder's good wishes to the younger generations. The graduates of 2023 have experienced three years of online classes and the epidemic, and have encountered the most difficult employment season in history. The background of Professor Yao Yang's speech implies the emotional tendency of this sentence.
There is a word "win" in both sentences, which means that Professor Yao hopes that students can face the uncertainty of the future with the attitude of a winner, the thinking of a winner, and the behavior of a winner. How to win?Professor Yao believes that optimists win the future, pessimists win the present, and countless presents and futures are people's lives. Why did the pessimists win now?Because pessimists always pay attention to the unfavorable information about the development of things, be calm and sober, be prepared for danger in times of peace, take precautions, be rational and objective, act cautiously, and be pragmatic and low-key, so they can win the present. Optimists, always pay attention to the positive factors of things, optimistic and firm, confident and brave, fearless of wind and rain, believe in the years, believe in the seeds, and go far, so they can win the future. Candidates can develop a deep understanding of the material based on this.
The second is to review tasks. In the writing requirement, "What associations and thoughts do the above materials trigger for you?".For a high school student, it is necessary to reflect one's speculative cognition of life. What is pessimism?What is optimism?Pessimism is not to lie down negatively, and optimism is not blind confidence. What is the relationship between pessimism and optimism?What is the relationship between the present and the future?These should be important to think about in writing. If you need to take into account the dualistic relationship when discussing, you can't just write about one aspect. When reviewing questions, it is necessary to reflect not only the logical thinking of cognition, but also the speculative characteristics of the materials and the speculative thinking of high school students.
The third is to review the requirements. In the writing requirements, it is mentioned that "relate to reality and express opinions". This reality can be one's own actual life or the social reality in China today. "Express your opinion" requires students to show their personality and write about themselves. You can write a narrative essay that shows this truth through someone's life storyYou can also write a proposal, explaining the reasons and specific practices to convince people.
In summary,A good idea isWe must not only persistently believe in the future, but also soberly recognize the present. There is a firm belief and optimistic spirit, but also a sense of distress and crisis. There is pessimism and rationality, and optimism is positive and upward. "Pessimistic" view of the present, "happy" to see the future. Optimism is like the main theme, and pessimism is like the accompaniment. Without losing the tone of pessimism, and plucking the strings of optimism. Receiving music is also sorrowful, and the line is stable and far-reaching, and so on.
Masterpiece appreciation
Without losing the tone of pessimism,
Let's pluck the strings of optimism
Class 2108 of the First Middle School of Liuyang City, Hunan
Liu Songyu
The stars and frost are flickering, living in all directions, the wheel of time is slowly passing by, and the baton of the times is clearly visible on the road ahead. As young people in the new era, we choose not to lose the voice of pessimism, and pluck the strings of optimism, rationality and self-confidence fly together, and youth is the same color of the times.
The sound of pessimism is because we know that "this is the best era, but also the worst era", although there are opportunities, there are also crises, if you want to make great achievements, we must be moderately pessimistic, and turn mountains and rivers into bright flowers. You can see that in the country, the huge wave of the three-year epidemic has been surging, and the economy has not fully recovered;Externally, the international situation is changing, the conflict between Russia and Ukraine, the contradictions between Palestine and Israel, and the future of a community with a shared future is still uncertain. Choosing to be pessimistic is not to choose to be willing to fall, or to imprison oneself in the shackles of passivity and stagnation, but to take the color of moderate pessimism and integrate it into the canvas of life, to know the strengths of others, to understand one's own shortcomings, to abandon the heart of arrogance and arrogance, and to give oneself more possibilities with a rational attitude, so as to avoid the dilemma of "hitting the south wall".
Only by losing the voice of pessimism can we hold a rational state of thinking, have a sense of catching up, and promote self-development, so as to win the present.
Everyone must extinguish this fire, and I am the only one to lift this fire", taking a moderately pessimistic state, you can gain insight into the truth of life, explore the way forward in the headwind, find the light in the long night, and stimulate the wisdom and courage of life. For example, Cai Lei, the former vice president of JD.com, unfortunately suffered from ALS, he knew that ALS was the first of the terminal diseases, and he was facing the "death penalty", and his time was short. After writing his will, he mobilized all forces to save himself and others, and advanced the research of ALS for nearly 50 years, and his own condition has also been significantly improved. From this point of view, without losing the sound of pessimism, it is to seek opportunities in danger;At the same time, it stimulates the courage and perseverance of "pretending to be a woodcutter", turning the horse into Kunlun in a desperate situation, refining the Fanghua chapter, and winning the beautiful talk of "three thousand Yuejia can swallow Wu".
And pull the string of optimism, in order to highlight the vitality of life, promote self-realization, win the future, and show the vastness and vastness of life.
Li Dazhao once said: "If you look at the world in the future, it will be a world of red flags." It was precisely this optimism and open-mindedness that made him unswervingly continue to carry out the work of the New Culture Movement even when the revolution was frustrated, and finally became a good story in history. Another example is the Nobel laureate Carico, who faced several salary cuts and dismissals when he was young, and encountered a lack of research. But in the face of her own predicament and the incomprehension around her, she reciprocated, regrouped, and used her strong will to live as a floating boat to the ideal shore, and finally broke through her life after a few years. And pluck the strings of optimism, take the way of self-determination, and realize the growth of life, so that we can live independently and enthusiastically, show the enthusiasm and beauty of life, and turn into a Beiming fish and cut a long whale across the sea.
In the distance, the voice of the giant echoed for a long time: infinite distance, countless people, all related to me. The road to search is long and bright, and we still have to travel thousands of miles. Without losing the sound of pessimism, and plucking the strings of optimism, he has become a hero of the times in the vicissitudes of the sea, and he has shown the true character of a hero in the shadow of the sword and sword. He looks back on the day, and the garden is full of spring.
[Teacher's Comments].
content. The article closely follows the key words of the material: "optimistic", "pessimistic", "win", "present" and "future", and the topic is reviewed accurately. From the importance of "not losing the heart of pessimism" to the necessity, and then to the meaning of "plucking the strings of optimism", the center is prominent. Focusing on the "what", "why" and "how", the logic is rigorous. At the same time, the examples of Cai Lei and Cariko are selected, and the words of Haizi and Li Dazhao are quoted to make the article rich and reasonable.
expressively. The article extracts the central thesis from the material "without losing the voice of pessimism, and plucking the strings of optimism", and then discusses from three aspects: without losing the voice of pessimism, with a rational state to give more possibilities to the self;Without losing the voice of pessimism, with a sense of catching up, to promote self-development;And pull the strings of optimism and highlight the vitality of life. Explain the role of pessimism and optimism in the present and future, and the article is clearly structured and fluently expressed. The use of illustration, citation and other methods of argumentation to make the argument more profound and three-dimensional.
characteristics. This article mostly uses whole sentences, which is magnificent;At the same time, some of the sentences are scattered and combined, smart and lively. Such as: "insight into the truth of life", "become a hero of the times in the vicissitudes of the sea, show the true colors of heroes in the shadow of swords and swords", etc.;The views are profound, such as: "To be pessimistic is to seek opportunities in crisis". The use of ancient poems and idioms is brilliant. It is proposed to assign points from "profound" and "literary style".
Receiving music is also sad, and the line is stable and far-reaching
Class 2108 of the First Middle School of Liuyang City, Hunan
Chen Jing
The optimist wins the future, the pessimistic wins the present", Professor Yao Yang's affectionate message at the graduation ceremony of Peking University triggered our deep thinking about life. In the face of the majestic road of life, only by maintaining pessimism about the present, but also insisting on optimism about the future, and accepting joy and sorrow, can we achieve steady and far-reaching results.
To be steady, you need to be a pessimist about the current life. A pessimistic attitude towards life means stopping and thinking in the midst of complexity, thinking about past regrets and current worries. It is not simply disappointed and at a loss, but a more sober and objective analysis that goes straight to the essence of life. It is precisely because of the thinking of the kernel that the question of "how can this be" and the rational exploration of "how to do it well" will emerge. Just as tragedy in a drama is more shocking, it puts on a mysterious and seductive cloak for reality;The same is true for life, which not only enriches emotions like tragedy, but also adds rationality to the current life and makes us walk more steadily.
Zhiyuan needs to be an optimist in the future life. The optimistic attitude to life is a kind of open-mindedness of "even if there are few sunny days ahead, regardless of the wind and rain, the road is long", it is a kind of "thousands of sails on the side of the sinking boat, and ten thousand trees in front of the sick tree" are newborn, and it is a kind of self-confidence of "looking up to the sky and laughing and going out, how can my generation be a Penghao person". Because of optimism, we have good expectations for the future, believe in the bright future, and believe in the sudden enlightenment. Hope and expectation are the most desirable background colors for building the futureOptimism makes this undertone even and powerful. An optimistic attitude towards life also strengthens the resilience of our lives. "Hopeful will be invincible", and with the resilience of life blessed by optimism, we can calmly face the stormy seas and go further.
To achieve steady and long-term success, it is necessary to combine moderate pessimism with optimism. Blind pessimism about the present will only bring self-pity, but not the courage and hope to rise from pessimism and be reborn;Blind optimism about the future may reproduce Ah Q's spiritual victory. Therefore, only by being moderately pessimistic about the present can we better accumulate the courage to move forward;Only by being moderately optimistic about the future can we better see the present. Only by combining moderate optimism with pessimism can we move more steadily and go further.
When the new chapter of the era is about to play, "the twinkling sun has crossed the proud mountains", and the young people are about to embark on a new journey of life
[Teacher's Comments].
content. The article detains the key words "pessimism" and "winning the present", "optimism" and "winning the future" in the proposition materials, and puts forward the view that "receiving music is also accepting sorrow, and acting steadily is the way to achieve far-reaching", and the examination of the topic is accurate. From maintaining pessimism about the present to be stable, to insisting on optimism for the future to go far, and finally to being both optimistic and pessimistic, with clear thinking, rigorous logic, and prominent center. The famous sayings of Li Bai, Liu Xi and others are selected for argumentation, with substantial content and sincere feelings.
expressively. After citing the materials, the article puts forward the central thesis, then argues from the two perspectives of optimism and pessimism, summarizes and refines the relationship between the two, and finally issues an initiative to "overcome obstacles and achieve steady and far-reaching progress with an attitude of accepting joy and compassion", responding to the center. Use methods such as citation arguments, example arguments, and analogy arguments to make arguments more full and profound.
Features. The article adopts the structure of the total score, which is clearly organized and the argument is in-depth layer by layer. The language is rigorous, the reasoning is rigorous and logical. He uses a variety of rhetoric, the language is vivid and timeless, the quotations are rich and wide, and the content is rich and meaningful. It is proposed to assign points from "richness" and "literary collection".