This is a narrative written by elementary school students that focuses on memorization, and expresses the theme of the essay through one or several events. Writing such an article should pay attention to:
1. Explain clearly the time, place, person, cause, process and result of the incident (six elements). Write the course of events clearly so that readers understand the ins and outs of events.
2. Choose things that you have personally experienced, deeply felt and more meaningful to write, so that you can write true feelings and move people.
3. Select events around the center of the composition, and choose typical events, the events that can best express the central idea of the composition as the materials for the composition. Don't include things that are not relevant or related to the center of the essay in your composition, so as to express the central idea of the composition.
Fourth, the selection of materials should be novel. Write less or no about the things that often appear in other people's essays, so that the essays you write will have a sense of freshness.
Fifth, when writing about several things, we should pay attention to the connection, transition and response between events, pay attention to the primary and secondary relationship between them, and be detailed appropriately.
6. Correctly grasp the narrative methods such as sequence, flashback, interpolation, and supplemental order, and choose one or several methods according to the specific content of the composition, and use them at the same time. 7. Lyrical, argumentative and other words in the composition should be concise and subtle, so as not to dilute specific examples.
My eyes. Friend, when you read this topic, you must have thought that I would describe my little eyes, right?No, you'll be surprised when you know that my nickname is "Four Eyes", who wants to have that nickname?
I really regret that I woke up habitually before dawn in the morning. Before Mom and Dad got up, I hurriedly closed the door and turned on the light, and in this beautiful moment, I lay on the bed and watched with relish the detection ** that I didn't finish watching last night. I didn't feel that the sky was getting brighter, and my mother got up, but I was still immersed in the wonderful plot, and I didn't notice that my mother knocked on the door to urge me to get up as usual. I heard my mother's shout, skillfully hid the book under the pillow, rubbed my eyes, yawned and opened the door as if I had just woken up. Mom asked, "Why don't you go to bed at night without turning off the lights?""Hey, it was only turned on this morning, and I had a dream, and I was scared, so I turned on the light and went to sleep. "I said it like a story.
After dinner in the evening, it is time for the whole family to have fun. I excused myself to be tired and wanted to sleep, so I went headlong into the room again. I learned the lesson of the past, closed the door, got into the bed, picked up the flashlight that had been prepared, and read in the bed until Mom and Dad went to sleep, then I turned on the light and lay on the bed to continue reading. That's it, just half a year of work, my eyesight has greatly decreased, I put on glasses, and those good names have also come to me, what "four-eyed", "blind", I am so aggrieved that I burst into tears, but who can blame this?It's only because I don't pay attention to protecting my eyes that I ended up like this. "Alas, my poor eyes!”
Brief comment: This article is about me getting up early and peeking at night behind my parents' back, and finally my eyesight has deteriorated greatly. The little author opened the problem and introduced the nickname "Four Eyes", which caused suspense and fascinating, and then described in detail what I watched in the morning and evening, with clear and convincing levels. In the end, he explained that he usually did not pay attention to eye protection, which caused the result of wearing glasses. Echoing the beginning, it is sobering.