Essay review After the Next Year review Zhong Xianglin

Mondo Education Updated on 2024-01-30

Depicting the small things in the market and showing the state of the world and human feelings often reflect the most real life. This little ** only writes about a small barber shop of "thirty square meters", a "fat man" customer and a "man with long hair" The expectations and confidence of "sunshine", showing the spirit of "people have to be tenacious" that ordinary people have, and the theme is full of positive significance. This article won the provincial first prize in the 20th "Ye Shengtao Cup" National New Essay Contest for Middle School Students.

Attached] original text. After the coming year.

Li Wenze (senior high school in Weifang Wenhua School, Shandong Province).

Do you go to work?"Haircut?Uncle Zhang!”

"Haircut?"Wait a minute. The man with long hair buttoned up his lunch box and shoved his phone into the few remaining spaces on the table. He rummaged through the table — wallets, old ledgers, delivery boxes, and a few cans covered in soot. The fat man named Uncle Zhang didn't urge, just stood aside without saying a word, looking up at this small shop of about 30 square meters. What he has is time.

Finally, the long-haired man took out a few tissues, wiped his mouth, rummaged through his pockets, found out that the mask was put on, and then stood still and prepared for work.

I turned on the air conditioner and it was warm after a while and I just put my clothes on the couch. Oh, you don't have to take off the mask, it doesn't affect. He said as he adjusted the temperature of the water heater.

The fat man who came to get a haircut didn't answer, but took off the jacket with a polished neckline, threw it on the sofa, and then went to the flush chair to lie down - there were two flush chairs, but the fat man didn't dwell on it for too long, one of them was new, not yet installed, and there was a layer of dust floating on it.

Why didn't I see Liping, don't I usually go with you?”

She went back to her hometown to find a job, and by the way, she accompanied the children, and I could do it myself, so I could be busy. Is the water hot?”

It's pretty much fine, not particular!”

The two were silent for a moment.

It's been a long time since I've seen you here, what have you been busy with lately?”

Originally, there was nothing to be busy with, but during the epidemic, everyone was at home and idle on the street. He changed his words again, "I've wanted to come for a long time, look at my hair, what is this like!."”

Yes, his gray sideburns scurried out like weeds, and he did look undignified as an elder.

Originally, there was nothing to be busy with," the fat man suddenly put on a proud and responsible expression, "but there are a lot of scattered little things, all of which are neighbors, and they help each other ......”

The long-haired man just listened and didn't move on to the topic. At this time, the fat man noticed that he seemed to have lost a lot of weight.

It wasn't until the hair was halfcut that the room finally warmed up. The fat man continued to chatter by himself: "Now there are not many more people on the side of the road than before, and if there are any, I won't be able to take a taxi, and I can't earn back the gas money, and I will sell the car and do something else in the next year." ”

The long-haired man in the mirror raised the corners of his mouth, but still didn't say anything. After another moment, he commented: "I think that when I return to the village next year, I will go to the village to charter a few acres ......of land to grow grain, and it is the safest to grow grainOrdinary people always have to eat, don't you say?”

That's not going to work!”

How can it not be?”

You city kids don't understand," he waved his hand and motioned for the long-haired man to stop, "it took me most of my life to get out of the countryside, and how could I run back because things were bad for a year or two." Then again, it was much more unlucky than now, and the house that had been built for several years was almost finished, but there was a big flood that year, and all the crops were gone, and the rest of the life had to go on. ”

Silence once again took over the dimly lit shop. The monotonous hum was playfully echoed by the silence again.

This time, he spoke first: "When are you going back for the New Year this year?"I plan to go back to Changchun next week, and I don't have much to do here, so I can help my family if I go back early. ”

People have to be resilient!Tell me that you need more snacks in the store. Uncle Zhang didn't answer the other party's question, and there was clearly a trace of anger in his voice. "Wait for the next year, wait for you to come back. I'll help you put that new chair up, you'll always need it. It's the same on the table, so I have to clean it up, and it's all facing the storefront. ”

The long-haired man nodded, smiled slumply, and finally perfected his hair.

Or 15?Do you see if there is still money in the card?The fat man put on his coat as he stepped towards the porch.

The price has risen, now it's 25, and there are still 15 in the card, just pay ten yuan to settle it......”

What are these words!Save another 300 dollars, and you'll have to come back more often in the future. The fat man waved his hand vigorously, blocking what the long-haired man hadn't said.

I'm delaying your meal," he gave one last glance at the rice cooker and lunch box on the cluttered table, "I'll come early next time and go." Then he pushed the door open and left.

Sunlight filters through the heavy glass doors, revealing through the dust floating in the air. The man with long hair stared at the sun for a long time.

Instructor: Jiang Yuanyuan).

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