Testimonials:If you have to say it, this is a very magical work, not quite like the online articles we normally see, but more like the kind of short stories in magazines.
The world setting of the story is actually very attractive to me, a huge and perfect world with the original operating order, and everyone in it is polite and keeps a good moral bottom line, which is really good compared to reality.
Rating:Third.
Classification:Short - Short **.
Properties:Travel through another world.
Poison test recommendations:
From the perspective of online texts, this is probably a group portrait crossingSo what's that big bunch at the beginning of the first chapter?At first glance, I thought it was about to write a lyrical prose.
and ......I won't say anything about one chapter at a time.,Judging from the setting, this story can theoretically be written for a long time.,The protagonist of the fifth chapter has just found a place in another world.,I really can't find a reason for the end of the eight chapters.。
In short, the style of this story is to make people look at it with hundreds of millions of points of confusion, and the sense of separation is very serious, which makes people feel that they have wasted a great idea.
Rating:B-
Classification:Short - Short **.
Properties:Crossing the emperor's overhead waste wood.
Current Status:Ended.
Toxicity test evaluation:
The background setting is a relatively ordinary time-traveling text, the protagonist has crossed over to become a wastewood emperor, has not inherited his memory, and lives a frightened life every day.
The writing is quite skilled.,Although the original owner is more ridiculous.,But the protagonist who travels through the past is a very normal modern person.,So it's still interesting to watch him complain and something like that.。
But the shortcomings of this story ......Maybe it's too slow. It's been five chapters.,The protagonist is still in a state of being confused and not knowing what to try everywhere.,Not to mention the breakthrough of backing or turning over.,He didn't even find a direction he could work towards......
It's too slow!
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