Modern people write poems in the old style
3 word disease. If you don't refine words well, it's a word disease.
Words are the most basic material of poetry, so the defects of words are often reflected in the faults of the rhythm, as well as the faults of words, sentences and articles, and all faults are often implemented as faults of words.
Let's take a look at some of the common problems: First of all, rhyme problems.
The so-called rhyme is to place the words with the same or similar finals at the end of the sentence in a fixed position in the poem, so that the poem can produce a kind of melodic beauty when reading. It is to increase the harmony and beauty of the poem, and to facilitate reading and memorization. In the process of rhyming, the selection of words according to the rhyme and the selection of words according to the meaning of the words sometimes conflict, not rhyming is not good, just for the sake of rhyme at any cost, do not pay enough attention to the use of words, it is easy to make the mistake of making up rhyme, that is, for the sake of rhyme and piecing together the text, such as Liu Zongyuan's "Don't Fit Brother Zongichi" poem:
The scattered remnants of the soul were gloomy, and they crossed the riverside with tears in their eyes.
went to the country for 6,000 miles, and died for 12 years.
Guiling miasma comes like ink, and Dongting spring water is like the sky.
I want to know that after that, the lovesick dream grows in the smoke of the Yingshu in Jingmen.
Rhyme is a flat water rhyme, the front of the ran, side, year, day four rhyme words are very smooth, in the sentence role is obvious, only the last rhyme foot word smoke, although with ran, side, year, day and so on the same rhyme, but the use is unnatural, the semantics in the coordination is blunt, there is a suspicion of strong rhyme, so Ji Jun "Yingkui law marrow publication error" pointed out that "the word 'smoke' rhyme". That is to say, the word smoke is not used very well in order to make up the rhyme. Of course, Liu Zongyuan is everyone, and only a quasi-master like Ji Xiaolan has the courage to make irresponsible remarks.
The ancients had poets who liked to use rare words, and modern people have a low level of average Chinese studies, and the occasional author who likes to drop his book bag is often amazing. Amazing is amazing, but those that can be regarded as strange words and strange words often leave readers at a loss and damage the aesthetic experience of the poem.
The use of rare characters may be influenced by Han Fu, but it can also show one's own erudition, such as Lu You's "Shebei Rice": Cover the firewood door on the 扊扅 (yanyi: the meaning of the door latch), which is not easy for ordinary people to understand without looking up the dictionary, and it is not easy to understand it when looking up the general dictionary.
When it comes to playing with overlapping words, many people like Mr. Yi An's "Seeking and seeking, cold and lonely, miserable and miserable." "Overlapping words do have formal beauty, but after all, it is not easy to balance the complex problem of overlapping words. Examples that only sensationalize in form and express the theme but are not of great use often show that the author is clever and clever, so there is a problem with word games, such as Georgie's "Tianjingsha": warbler Yan Yan Chunchun, flowers and willows are true.
In addition to overlapping words, the repetition of various words often shows that the poem is not strong, and the bench of the words is too thin, so it is a dilemma to become a poem in a hurry, such as the clumsy work "Rich Flowers":
The garden was in disagreement last night, and the hibiscus was like tears.
It is difficult to form a battle with the lonely geese, and the drunk flowers dare not groan.
If you want to ask the red face for a thousand years, you are ashamed to play the green qi stringed piano.
In exchange for the only laugh in Allure, who is now a rich man.
Hibiscus is like tears, laurel is like a trace", and the name of the flower has been used, and the back is "drunk to the flowers" as a couplet, which is at risk of being poor. It's "red face" and "smile", it's all about the beauty of the article, and it's the result of having nothing to say.
Modern people write poems in the old style about refining characters (2).
Modern people write poems in the old style about refining characters (1).
Modern people write poems in the old style of the dictionary (5).
Listen to Lei Ji (3) (Selected Original Poems by Zhang Chengyu: Seven Uniques).
We foodies have power (4).