Student's background
The IB system of a well-known international school in Shanghai.
IB Estimated Score: 32
Language score: Duolingo 130
Early in the morning, student Y, who was admitted to the dream school, cried with joyto share the good news with the teachers in the group:
Introduction to the institutionmt. holyoke college
mt. holyoke college, founded in 1837, isOne of the oldest and preeminent women's liberal arts colleges in the United StatesIt is also one of the popular liberal arts colleges chosen by many American upper-class and high-net-worth families for their children。The Academy is known forA tradition of academic excellence, a global outlook, and an emphasis on women's leadershipand famous。As a member of Massachusetts' prestigious Five Colleges consortium, MHC has partnered with UMASS, Amherst College, Smith College, and Hampshire College to create a unique platform for cross-university resource sharing. Students will not only be able to be deeply educated by MHC during their university life, but will also be able to:Choose courses within the Alliance, take advantage of the rich library resources, participate in a variety of cultural activities, and broaden your academic and social spheres
MHC offers one for women through the five-school allianceDiverse, inclusive, and resourcefulto train them to become globally-minded leaders. 
First acquaintance -
Then come to the all-round planning and implementation of people
Student Y after joining the service system of ZailaiThe planning coach immediately starts a brainstorming and planning session with the student, from his upbringing as a child, to sharing his interests and hobbies, and daily newsEvery flashing idea of student Y was extremely cherished by the teachers。In the process of brainstorming,The planning tutor guides Student Y to think about his application image positioning, using SWOT analysis methods, etcHelp and guide student Y to think about his strengths and relative weaknessesAnd in the following time, strengthen the strengths and make up for the shortcomings。To this end, the planning tutor helped Student Y to set detailed goals and timelines, and communicated with Student Y on a regular basis. 
Plan the time plan that the tutor has developed for student Y).
Through detailed communication, and combined with the KEIS party summarized by the re-entry person based on big data**Zalairen tutors use their extensive experience and resources to help students create a unique application image。After brainstorming with the students and understanding the students' strengths,We have developed a personalized application profile for our students: hip pop dancers and behavioral researchers with diverse interests and humble (all cap). KEIS 1 Academic Excellence - GPA Escort:
Student Y is an IB curriculum system, and in the DP stage of Grade 11, students need to select courses in six major course groups, and are assigned HL high difficulty and SL regular difficulty courses. Someone Mentor AgainIt helped student Y carefully analyze the learning foundation, disciplines he is good at, and the future development direction, and provided scientific suggestions for course selection。Due to the difficulty of the IBDP course and the need for a lot of research, writing, and critical thinking,Again, we helped student Y match with the strongest teachers in the IB disciplineto ensure that students can fully absorb and digest the knowledge learned on campus, and lay a solid foundation for university applications
Let's come back to the tutoring plan developed by student Y).
Keis 2 Excellent Comprehensive Quality - Rich Extracurricular Activities Arrangement:
Y classmate: YesBusiness, consumer behavior, organizational researchand other areas are interested in this,The tutor planned and arranged a variety of activities to help student Y fully explore his interests and hobbiesFor example, through the SIC competition, help student Y to familiarize himself with and understand the relevant knowledge of financial investment, and lead the group to complete an investment strategy analysis report on environmental protection and social impactIn addition, I will come againHelpY classmateNYU NYU research projects were planned and matched to learn more about consumer behavior and psychology, through the analysis and study of well-known brands such as Reebok,Student Y has mastered comprehensive and specific scientific research knowledge and the ability to apply it flexibly
Keis 3 Outstanding Personal Strengths - Leadership & Creativity:
Student Y has studied art since he was a child and is very good at makeup and stylingThe tutor saw the student's shining point and helped Student Y give full play to his strengths and transform his interests and strengths into community contributions。For example, organizing flash mob events at school to promote hip hop culture, marketing planning for the school's PROM ball, creating unforgettable memories for everyone, and supporting makeup and styling for large and small campus events. These activities,It is not only closely related to the original interests of student Y, and veryGood example of her organizational leadership and strong willingness to engage with the communityto bring a positive impact to the surroundingsThese are all excellent qualities that American universities would very much like to see in applicants
Keis 4 Personality & Potential - Dancing for a Different Life:
StudentsThe growth and transformation of thoughts, mentalities and values are often presented through a specific carrierFor student Y, this carrier is dance. usIn the planning, there is no deliberate emphasis on high-intensity and high-academic activities, but respects the child's personality and talent, and finds the child's biggest highlight on the basis of meeting the comprehensive assessment of the American holistic, and continuously strengthens it。In the usual service communication, the tutor maintains close communication with student Y and understands the child's thoughts and opinions on different things openly and honestly. Through dance, Student Y became more confident, more inclusive, and truly gained a deeper understanding of "diversity"., whileThese perceptions, which are full of details and tension, are meticulously presented in the documents through the skillful hands of the tutor of Zailairen
It's application season
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In terms of school selectionStudent Y's IB score and TOEFL score are not dominant, and the TOEFL score has not reached the minimum score required by MHCAt the critical moment, the tutor guided and helped Student Y to turn to the Duolingo exam, and urgently ranked the strongest teachers, tutoring Duolingo for student Y,In the end, 130 language scores were obtained to meet the threshold requirements
Due to the late release of student Y's language scores, MHC is the most favorite university for student Y, and the tutor will overcome all difficulties and fully support student YPrepare MHC high-quality applications。It is worth celebrating that the hard work and preparation of Student Y and his tutors have paid off!Clerical aspectsBrainstorming is often the most important but overlooked point in the whole process of preparing the application essayOur service has a great focus on the brainstorming and material gathering part。From July to September,I had a total of more than 6 hours of ** sessions with my students. In this process, the tutor had an interactive communication with the students, using heuristic questions to guide the students to share the details of their lives。For example: "What are the 5 most memorable items in your past life?""What's your favorite book or movie?"What did you learn from this?"What's your favorite singer and what is his most appealing trait?""Describe one of your most memorable first experiences in your life" starts with questions and answers, and students gradually open their minds and open their hearts to share their memoriesThe essay tutor gradually discovered the shining point in the student。The students' greatest interest is in the field of dance, and the focus is on hip-hop and freestyle street dance. At school, she is not only a dance scholar nominated by the school, but also a community leader who constantly encourages students around her to participate in dance activities. In a ** with her,She was also found to have a strong desire to express herself on topics such as aesthetic diversity and gender equality, which formed a perfect integration with the dance, creative makeup practice, and drama participation involved in her extracurricular activities. Our main book starts with an incident of participating in a hip-hop dance competition, and vividly describes the process of demonstrating an impromptu dance in front of the judges as we prepare to go on stage, with a short "five-second preparation" as a clue throughout the text, and uses humble, a very connotative hip-hop song, to metaphorize the growth path of students to break the tradition and express freely, and find the right in the dance groupPeople of different sizes, genders, and backgrounds are extremely tolerant, and hope to pass on this spirit to more peopleAfter the basic structure of the main essay was established, the tutor and the students continued to maintain in-depth communication, and jointly improved the details in the essay。And according to the character established in the main document, we also echo it on the list of activities. Including keywords such as "hip hop culture artist" and "creative makeup design".We all highlight the students' personal exploration and expression in the fields of aesthetics, literature and art, which is also the biggest academic highlight of her
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Tutor's Message:
I am very happy that student Y has gained the hard-won dream admission!We are honored to witness the growth and change of student Y along the way, and hope that we can continue to stick to our dreams and shine in the future!