This is Murong Dongtang's 0022nd original diary. I will continue to publish my diary every day and be a person who understands traffic. This article was written on December 25, 2023.
Piling up words with flowery rhetoric can't cover up the low level of content in the article.
I will never forget when I was in elementary school, I listened to Teacher Xue Mo say "observation" on the podium. This was my first lesson in writing, and Murong Dongtang was really impressed by it.
I've read too many articles that seem to be brilliant, but in fact they have nothing to say and don't know what to say. There are many quotations from scriptures and metaphors.
Such an article seems to be quite literary, but it is actually very unreadable. It's like a mass-produced Internet celebrity face in Douyin's short **, which is heart-pounding at first glance, but it tastes the same as chewing wax when it is savored.
Unfortunately, the wind picked up in the calm night, and I lost myself. There is no one to support me in the days of grievances, in fact, I also want to cry. ", aspiring girls first aspire to seek love after that...Words like this are like scratching your boots. It seems to make sense, but it's not readable.
If you want ordinary and simple words to leave traces in people's hearts, you need to polish them over and over again. For example, Murong Dongtang wrote the short ** copy of "How is the white wine of the Tang Dynasty, Wu Wei knows", but it takes a whole day to revise it in just 200 words. And Mu Yongdong Tang wrote six different versions.
Because it is very simple to write a long article, for example, divide the article into many different paragraphs in the way of the total score. Throw out the topic in the introduction and state the purpose of the writing. Next, analyze the characteristics of the writing object. Draw out the text, enrich the content, refine the expression, and clarify the logic. Make your own opinions. Give examples, make analogies. Finally, the conclusion is thrown.
So it's actually quite easy to write a long article. The difficulty is to write the article short and concise, and tell a story clearly in the simplest and shortest words.
If you're reading this, you're wondering what I'm talking about in this article. Then I'm going to tell you, I'm sorry. Because Murong Dongtang is really busy, he really doesn't have the energy to write this article short.