Commentary on the Poetry of Ge Ming Cao.
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Flowers on the cliffs
Wen Deng Wanfa.
I don't know when it bloomed so brightly.
It's something that people can't help but love.
You said you would wait for me during the rainy season on the cliffs.
Earn clouds that others can't.
It really keeps me up at night.
Money can't buy you a beautiful smile.
Don't seduce me so gracefully.
moved my impulsive youth.
The passion that goes out of his way.
Personality is captured alive by you.
The heart has since fallen into your abyss.
March 16, 2021.
Appreciation
Judging from the context of the whole poem, this small poem can be regarded as a metaphor for people. Borrow the beauty of small flowers to praise people. And in the poem, it is also emphasized that a kind of beauty that is not easy to obtain has a price. It is this kind of beauty that planted the roots of love in the poet's heart, hoping to see the beauty of that prosperous world. As the old saying goes: Women are those who please themselves. It is the two-way "rush" between flowers and poets that has led to such a shocking love of flowers. From the poem, we can feel that the poet's heart is young, fiery, and passionate, and it is precisely because of this mentality that such beautiful fantasies and adventures are generated. This proves that the heart of the poet is eternally young. Next, enter the body of the poem and taste the enthusiasm of the poet.
Let's look at the first stanza first, the poet said that when flowers bloom brightly, people can't help but like them, which also fully shows that human appreciation and praise of beautiful things are common, and there is almost no one who doesn't like beautiful things. At the beginning of the poem, the poet's joy is shown, indicating that the beauty of this flower seems to have magical powers. Then, the poet uses anthropomorphism, as if in dialogue with flowers, which sublimates the emotion a little more, so that not only can the poet see a different landscape, but the reader can also imagine that special place from the dialogue. Then, the poet expounded the priceless beauty of the mountain flower from the perspective of value, which is the highest praise from the worldly point of view, and from the psychological point of view, this mountain flower is the priceless treasure of the poet. The poet uses a very exaggerated way to convey this message to the reader. The solitary approach of flowers, getting the scenery that others can't get up, ** people can't sleep, no amount of money can buy, this value continues to strengthen and consolidate in the subconscious, pushing the beauty of mountain flowers to the climax.
Looking at the second verse, it can be seen from the content that the poet has completely fallen. In the first line, the appearance of the flower is colorful, as if the beauty of the ** power. In the second line, because of the beauty of flowers, the poet is pulled back to his youth, and the throbbing and commotion makes the poet's heart full of vitality. The third line, "the enthusiasm that goes out of his mind" is exactly what he only had in his youth, and it is rare for an adult to have such an experience, which fully shows that the poet always retains his enthusiasm and impulse for life, because an encounter with a flower ignites the fire of love in his heart. This not only burns itself, but also illuminates the people around it. In the fourth and fifth lines, the poet's heart is captured and falls into the abyss of flowers, and ending the poem with such an ending is as if falling in love, which makes people reverie.
Therefore, there is reason to believe that this little poem is by no means as simple as writing flowers, and it is clearly an emotional sustenance. The meeting between flowers and people attracts people, that is, the meeting between people attracts people, which makes the poet return to youth and refresh, this is the power of love. The poet's metaphorical expression makes people feel the superpower of true love. As the saying goes, treasures are easy to come by, but lovers are hard to find. Not everyone has this opportunity, but when it comes, it should be firmly grasped. The poet is fortunate to not only appreciate the beauty, but also to be guided by the illusion of an ancient mythological story.
Throwing bricks and leading jade, discussing poetry on poetry, and learning by writing, this is the end. If you have different opinions, please feel free to communicate in the comment area. If you have a recommended poem, please leave a message to let me know, enjoy it together, and make progress together. I am the poet Ge Ming Cao, welcome to pay attention, see you in the next issue of poetry review!
Author:Deng Wanfa, who has been in the army for 15 years and has the rank of major, worked in the ** department of Zhongshan City, and later founded a business and did business. Passionate about poetry.