Author: He Yirui 9 years old
*: "Rushing Little Writers" National Holographic Essay Contest for Primary and Secondary School Students.
Original text: When the first rays of sunlight in the summer morning shine on the earth, the little butterfly who doesn't like to sleep lazily gets up to do morning exercises! The first link: running, just when she was running hard, she tripped over. Little Butterfly rubbed her sore head with her hand. complained: "Why is your luck so bad today, and you can bite the gold halfway." After that, the little butterfly touched the frayed wound on her body again, and then reluctantly stood up, patted the dust on her body, and casually glanced at the "stumbling block" that tripped over her. It doesn't matter if you don't look at it, it's shocking to see it. "Wow, a snow-white eggshell! The little butterfly exclaimed, and the little green worm and the little ant were awakened, but their eyelids were like being stained with glue, and they couldn't open them even if they wanted to, so they had to ask in unison, "What's wrong?" ”
Early Morning" Chen Yifei is 11 years old.
Selected from the "Children's Painting Garden" International Children's Calligraphy and Painting Competition.
Little Butterfly deliberately sold off: "You'll know in a while, now you go to sleep, leave me alone!" The little ant and the little green worm didn't know why, so they simply fell asleep again. The little butterfly stood on tiptoe, as if afraid of waking them up (that is, the little green worm and the little ant), and carefully flew towards the eggshell, and gently lifted it, and gently placed the eggshell next to the little ant and the little green worm. In the last second, I could hear their heartbeats quietly, but in the next second, I only heard the little butterfly make a move and roared in Hedong: "Look, look what I found!" The little green worm and the little ant were frightened and jumped up, and when they saw that it was a little butterfly, it turned from frightened to angry, and the little ant was the first to react, and angrily stomped on the little butterfly, but then thought about it: she has been selling Guan Zi just now, according to her temperament, she will definitely give us a surprise! calmed down in an instant, and when the little green worm saw the little ant calm down, he knew that he must know what little butterfly was doing, so he also followed the example of the little ant and extinguished the anger in his stomach. Like a little narrator, Little Butterfly told everyone what she thought: "I found an eggshell, we can use it to make an eggshell seesaw!" The little green worm twisted flexibly, and looked in the direction pointed by the little butterfly, and sure enough, there was a white eggshell placed there. Little Butterfly embarrassedly asked, "Is this idea good?" "Very well, we raise our hands in approval" and gave a thumbs up to the little butterfly. Little Butterfly suddenly shouted, "There's an ice cream stick there!" The little ant had an idea and came up with a good idea, that is, "we can turn the eggshell upside down, put the ice cream stick on it, and it's done." The other little insects listened to the words of the little ant and felt that it was very reasonable, so they did according to the words of the little ant, and in an instant an eggshell seesaw was clearly displayed in front of everyone's eyes, and the little ant was eager to try, the first one jumped up, and the little green worm also jumped up hard. But I don't know this jump, and I am scared by it. The little green worm actually bounced the little ant up, and the little ant was so frightened that he peed his pants, and hurriedly shouted: "Help!" Only then did the little green worm react, carefully helped the little ant up, and said pitifully: "Are there any other games, the little ant's strength is too small, and this seesaw is easy to hurt it!" The little ant also chimed in: "That's it, that's it, can we try to play with eggshell hot air balloons!" "yes, I didn't think of that! The little green worm slapped his thigh. They first put a handkerchief over the gap in the eggshell, then found an iron ring to hold the handkerchief and the eggshell in place, lit a fire with a match, and an eggshell hot air balloon was ready. Little butterflies can fly, no need to make hot air balloons. "Boom" - With a long roar, the eggshell hot air balloon rises into the sky. Although the little ant was a little scared, he forgot the tension in his heart when he looked at the beautiful scenery outside the window.
But summer is like a child's face, it changes when it is said. Just now the sky was clear, but now it is full of dark clouds, lightning and thunder. He hurriedly let the eggshell hot air balloon land on the grass, and together they turned it upside down, and the three friends snuggled up to hide from the rain, whispering to them. Unconsciously, the rain stopped, the sky gradually darkened, the stars blinked, I don't know whether they were complaining that the night was too dark to see clearly, or praising the beautiful scene of the night, the three friends did not know when to turn the eggshell upside down, lying in it and falling asleep, and they were covered with a golden feather, maybe it was a precious gift left to them by the eggshell owner chick!
Essay Review: This essay describes the interesting adventures of little butterflies and other small bugs. The author uses vivid language and delicate descriptions to make readers feel the vitality of the summer morning and the friendship of the little bugs. The story highlights the ingenuity and creative nature of the little butterflies, as well as the spirit of cooperation and willingness to try new games with the little bugs. The plot is interesting with ups and downs, full of surprises and joy. The writing technique is lively and the plot design is ingenious, conveying the values of positivity, courage to innovate and friendship and mutual assistance.
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