Ascend
Le Zhenghe (Hubei).
The pan is covered with moss, and the white bird on the cold cliff is still there.
The crowd tends to be Zimo, who asks Nanshan.
Liao Guohua:The two sentences of the small absolute use contrasting techniques and fight against each other, the front and back of the discussion, the discussion is based on the prospect, so the discussion is not empty, and there is a question.
Yao Quanming:The opening sentence implies that there are few climbers, and the accompanying sentence says that the scenery is high and elegant. From this, the sigh of the conjunctive sentence naturally arises, Zimo is compared to Nanshan, and the theme of the poem is clear.
Li Junru:The body of the five uniques should not be superficial. Although the poem is simple, the meaning is profound. The first two sentences are written in the scene, which is quite ancient. Only moss accumulates in the high places, and the white birds return, and Ling Han's meaning of independence is seen beyond words. Three or four sentences followed, and the crowd tended to be Zimo, floating and sinking in the prosperity, and unintentionally in the good realm of Nanshan. The sustenance is also good. It's very rare. Or this poetry is in the confines of the ancients, why is it today's poetry? Let me ask the people of this day, can they encounter this situation? If you can feel it, why can't you write it? Shall there be new words and new words that can be used for this poem? This poem is profound, and it is also a masterpiece for this collection.
Three to the new big brother
Lin Feng (Hong Kong).
The spring breeze blows the green trees, and the night rain is cold.
Don't be unspeakable for a long time, you can return from more.
The willow poplar is empty and charming, and the peach and plum are fragrant.
Looking north and thinking for a long time, the clouds and mountains are separated by sunset.
Liao Guohua:This is the third of the old singing and composition of Hong Kong Lin Lao and the former president of Shanxi, and the third song is selected for each place, because he likes his chin coupling and does not use algae decoration, and he plainly expresses what he thinks in his heart, which is quite the taste of the five laws of the Tang people to write about the travel situation; The neck couplet is often linked with words that represent feelings, and you can write what you see in front of you, and the knot is also flushed and distant.
Yao Quanming:Depending on the sentence "the spring breeze blows the green trees, and the night rain is cold", Lin Weng can also be said: "This language has divine help, not my words." ”
The water town is twilight
Safety East (Sichuan).
The drizzle is wet and cold, and the river is lonely in the twilight.
There is no boat in the gulls, only the flat waves and the green hills.
Liao Guohua:Brother An's seven unique books are written about the twilight of the water town, and they also write about the loneliness of their own mood. A "lonely" word is the perfect tone. can refine the word "iron" in the concluding sentence, and write the foreground object Pingbo Cuilan vividly. On the surface, "timid" is actually happy, and he may be busy taking pictures from angles. On the contrary, it is the poet's cunning.
Liu Luning:The scenery is in love, and it is even colder. Love is in the scene, and I feel more lonely.
Li Junru:The first sentence uses the language of the ancients, a little ordinary, and the second sentence points out the emotion, the word lonely, leading to the scene of three or four. There is no gull, and the boat is empty, which shows that the water town is really uninhabited. The meaning of loneliness has been confirmed since then. And the writing scene of the four sentences is not only good ironing, but also the words are proper. The wave is a flat wave, but it is seen that it is quiet and far away, and why is the green mountain ironed by the flat wave? Cover with the mountain shadow reflected in the water, sometimes there is a clear wave into writing, the rotation returns to the flat, so the ironing tempering of the fine, is really rare. In three or four sentences, although the ancients are concentrated, they are not ashamed.
Green Lake
Wei Xinhe (Beijing).
Wang Qiyuan is a condensation of soldiers, and the heroic domain Zhaowu sees Longxing.
Good wind, good water, good feng shui, long protection of the south to Yongli Mausoleum.
Note:The new five generations of history An Chongrong biography: The Son of Heaven would rather have a kind of yes, and the strong soldiers and horses will do it. Wu Sangui was called the emperor, the country name was Zhou, and the Yuan Zhaowu was changed.
Liao Guohua:This is one of the recent Kunming sentences of Brother Xinhe, looking at ancient themes. admires good means, short space, can accommodate two historical facts separated by thousands of years, and it is so lightweight. In addition, I also appreciate his sentence refining skills, and the use of sentence reversal and overlapping words has a wonderful chant and three sighs.
Liu Luning:Wonderful sentence change!
Li Junru:This poem is actually a history. The self-note is a footnote to the first two sentences, and there is no need to repeat it. Three or four sentences see the deep meaning. Cover the wind and water, not only by the military spirit, but also can protect the righteousness of the world.
Chronicles of old age
Yang Yiming (Shanghai).
I didn't look or listen much, but I begged everyone to wake up.
Headaches are frequently added to the world, and the eyes are tired and rarely green.
is still temperamental, only because of plaque to take statins.
In addition to decoction medicine, there is also leisure and twilight.
Liao Guohua:Witty, humorous is one of the key points of Brother Yiming's poems, and it can also be said that if Brother Yiming does not sign the author's name, I may also suspect that I will not leave ten. This kind of colloquial language is written into poetry, which seems to be easy to find, but if you don't pay attention to it, you can easily fall into the magic of saliva slogans. But once you get it right, you can take away the beauty of nature, and the work of creation is exciting and convincing. It seems easy but hard, believe it.
Yao Quanming:"Headaches are frequently added to the world, and tired eyes are rarely green", just this couplet, you will see the old spicy. "It's still temperamental, and it's only because of the plaque to take statins", the pair is jaw-dropping. Doing your own thing and taking statins is an absolute thing that can be drunk.
Insomnia
Liao Runchang (Guangdong).
The wind knife is cool to the pillow, and the window lattice.
The silhouette has floated, and the sheep have listened to it.
The temples are covered with dust, and the teardrop sleeves are blue.
Regardless of the source, the corner is awake.
Liao Guohua:The image of the wind knife at the beginning is out of harmony with the rest of the text, and the wind knife frost arrow is an ambush for the tragic state of life or extremely cold weather, which is not. The following chin and neck couplets can be read, there are images and interest, but it is also a poem around insomnia, how the wind and night breeze are.
President Sanhe Lin
Shi Xin 24-02-01
The lanterns are still in the old trees, and the snow is cold at night.
I was homesick several times, and I returned with a sense of sadness.
The Xiangjiang River is empty and melancholy, and the Fenshui is waiting for Fangfei.
I hope the future is good, climb the mountain to see the sunset.
Liao Guohua:This is the three harmony of the Ming brothers, and it is also quite appreciated in the two joints. Jaw time, neck space, the language is peaceful and light, the image is vivid, the size is thousands of miles, warm and mellow.
Great cold
Chen Boling (Hunan).
It has been reported that the cold wave invaded at night, and the trees of the empty barren ridge were sinking in the twilight.
The wine around the hearth is hot, and the outside of the fowl is separated.
Shuoqi stores spring orderly, and can groan when he is drunk.
This will be melancholy in the wind and snow, and tomorrow's plum blossoms can be found.
Liao Guohua:The second couplet is a good sentence to write about the situation of the Great Cold Festival, especially the neck couplet, both virtual and real, and the proportion is steady and steady. The overall composure and steady, see your own face.
The day before the beginning of spring, I visited the Peach Blossom Valley in Taoyuan in the south
Fan Yikun (Guangdong).
A path of peach blossoms is stronger than wine, and the air is as clear as silk.
I will pour the blocks from today, and then how long will it take to save the smoke.
At the beginning of the victory, I promised myself, and I often sang about the spring.
Secluded but taking advantage of the pine shade, it is really good to raise the grass and trees.
Liao Guohua:You can see peach blossoms in the twilight, and they bloom so luxuriantly and vigorously, there is really nowhere else but Lingnan. The battle between the two in the joy, the first-class water, one is right, all neat and natural, and the opening and closing are moderate. The whole is also good, the connection is like writing another thing, and there is no chance and the rhyme is endless.
There is a delivery at the end of the year
Wang Hailiang (Hebei).
The lights of the city are shining on the streets, and there is no trace of the light moon.
After the snow, I don't know how far and near the sky is, and the plum blossom news asks the West Lake.
Liu Luning:The real is false, and the pen is affectionate. Twist high.
vinegar
Liu Daoping (Sichuan).
Brew into a pot, the color is like the Yellow River.
When encountering a sour taste, it will be shaken by salt and chased.
The villain is jealous, and the gentleman hates tooth grinding!
Who has this jar, only to know that there is a lot of bitter wine.
Yao Quanming:This is a humorous "vinegar" poem, which has a certain warning value. The first couplet alludes to the vinegar together, and the vinegar person jumped into the Yellow River and couldn't wash it away. The jaw coupling means that vinegar makes people lose their minds, and the vinegar person is depicted more and more black. The neck couplet writes the performance of bystanders, which is a bit of a meaning that the relatives are bitter and the enemies are happy. The "practical value" of jealousy in the tail couplet can make family conflicts constant.
Sweep the house
Ding Yonghai (Gansu).
The smell of the year is getting stronger, and the windows were wiped yesterday and the Shan house is now.
It is difficult to sweep the world, but it goes back and forth a few squares.
Yao Quanming:Vulgar clouds, twenty-four, beating dust. This first was born from this, and reversed the allusion of Chen Fan sweeping the world, "Later Han Shu Chen Wang Liebiography", (Chen Fan) said: "The big husband is in the world, when the world is removed, and the affairs are in one room." The twist of the poem has a sense of self-deprecation because of the reversal, and this kind of self-deprecation is best at Nie Xuan's crossbow in modern times.
Yongxue
Hong Junmo (Sichuan).
Drifting unconsciously, the Jun family was hazy through the veil.
Qing Ben Guang cold sky guests, why borrow plum blossoms for fragrant incense.
Yao Quanming:"A beautiful woman, why be a thief. The use of this sentence in snow is slight. "Plum and snow are three points white, but the snow loses a piece of plum fragrance", the snow is fragrant, and there is no need to borrow from the plum, but the ice and snow, where can there be incense? It can be borrowed from wine, and it can be borrowed from hot pot.
The night before the beginning of spring, the Shanghai-Chongqing Expressway was made
Wang XII (Anhui).
Welcome the mountains to send the sunset, and the hometown is close to the end of the world.
I am not afraid to return late when I drive, and I have to get home before the spring breeze.
Yao Quanming:The ingenuity of poetry is often found in quatrains, because quatrains are masters of capturing inspiration. It's like a spider's web, it's easy to make and easy to operate, and with a single wave, you can catch the fleeting moth of inspiration. Like the poem "I'm not afraid to return late when I drive, I want to get home before the spring breeze" is the moth stuck to the poem bag by the spider web.
On Saturdays and Sundays, Pu'an Temple sits near Lawei
Wang Congying (Liaoning).
Over the years, the roads have come and gone, and the snow-colored forest has been uneven.
The eaves peak green to stay in the sun, the mountains are late and nearly rejuvenated.
The hand-copied scriptures are forgetful, and the incense on the stove is the most lovely.
Half a cup of Zen tea sits opposite each other, and the old poems are read and spirited.
Yao Quanming:There are many scenes in the eyes, and you must choose between them. You see that the author is at his fingertips, and he feels spring everywhere. He only designated a few objects to make a fuss: the snow color in the forest, the green peaks of the eaves, the evening in the mountains, the scriptures, the incense of the furnace, the Zen tea, and the old poems. Reading the author's poems carefully, you can figure out the method of "rushing to the chapter".
Invite friends on a cold day
Duan Sijing (Hebei).
Meet Qingla wine, rhyme and sing the New Year.
The wind outside the window is tight, and the words in front of the bottle are frequent.
It has been difficult to be a guest for three years, and his temples are not forgiving.
After a long time of indulging in drunkenness, let alone a few rounds.
Li Junru:The wording of this poem is simple, but it shows the truth. The language is implemented and reads amiably, which is its advantage. The neck coupling is especially good, and the syntactic intention is heavy and thick, which is close to the ancients. "It is difficult to be a guest for three years", on the cold day of the past three years, there are many people who are bound by their feet, so there are fewer guests. See you again on this day, I have felt that the vicissitudes of life have gradually changed, so there is a saying that "two temples are not forgiving". It belongs to the work and there is no trace of axe chisel. Rewarded.
Meet old friends
Wu Shuoxian (Guangdong).
The years have passed in a hurry, and I know the past and the past.
The sound leaves an impression, and the details become blurred.
The location is often the same, and the time is not the same.
The reunion mentions the past, and the emotions are always the same.
Li Junru:The beauty of this poem is all about the truth. The first six sentences are like time and place, and many of them are used in today's language, but they are paved layer by layer, and they are contradicted in the sentence one by one, such as the sound and appearance still leave an impression, the details have been blurred, although the place is self-congruent, the time has not matched, everyone can feel the same way when they read it. And even if the contradiction is like this, once "reuniting and mentioning the past", "the emotion is always the same". The most like meeting and smiling. The wording of this poem is a little lacking in poetic style, but Gong Dingxiyun: "I ** chapter forgive the middle and evening, and I am a famous artist with a little work." Yu took this poem, but also with its work in the emotion.
About the guests in this issue
The ranking of guests is based on the elderly.
Liao Guohua:Born in 1945, a native of Jingzhou, Hubei, he is a consultant of the poetry platform of "Xiaolou Listening to the Rain". The name of Zhai is not vain, the people of the village, and the people of Longzhou Dao. Since childhood, he has studied poetry, has no door and no school, writes his heart by hand, and does not follow the law, so he is known as the "poet bandit" on the rivers and lakes.
Liu Luning:The screen name is Lao Liu Teahouse. He is a member of the planning committee of the poetry platform of "Listening to the Rain in a Small Building" and an executive director of the Shanghai Poetry Society.
Yao Quanming:No. Zhuo'an, don't sign three floors, write poets in Wuhan, Hubei. He is the author of "Xihu Xuan Yincao", "Bamboo Laughter Collection", "Full Text Annotated Edition of Inscriptions (Ten Volumes)", etc., and edited "Tongyun New Edition", "Contemporary Poetry Hundred Schools", "Han Poetry Grand View", "Contemporary Poetry Series", etc.
Li Junru:The word Hanyi. A native of Changde, Hunan. He learned poetry from Professor Chu Baozeng in Beijing. President of the Cadre Society. He has won the gold medal of the 3rd Xiangtianhua Cup Global Poetry Competition, the 2nd Liu Zheng Young Poet Award and other awards.
Edited by Zhang Xuefang and proofread by Feng Xiao