The primary school student "sent the teacher's bag", and the father was amazed by the child's thoughts
I'm going to give the teacher a school bag", an elementary school student"Diary"Became popular on the Internet, Dad: Your son is very well-behaved!
In the process of learning and Xi, primary school students emphasize continuous accumulation, especially in Chinese subjects, and strive to read various books and accumulate rich vocabulary and expression skills, with the aim of significantly improving their writing skills. In order to cultivate students' good writing Xi, teachers and parents often encourage students to keep a diary.
The diary is an emotional, sentimental form of sincere writing for elementary school students who silently write about their private affairs, hoping to keep them secret so that their parents do not overstep their authority. The other is"Assignments"After handing it in, it will be checked and corrected by the teacher. When the diary becomes homework, the creative inspiration of primary school students will be limited to a certain extent, some students may write superficially, and some students write imaginatively"Diary"It also became lively.
I'm going to give the teacher a gift. "For a time, elementary school students"Diary"became a hot topic and caught the attention of my father:"You're such a thoughtful little boy. "Elementary school students"Diary"Some interesting family secrets are often revealed, and teachers will also find some parent gossip when they check the diary. It wouldn't be too bad if elementary school students only talked about their parents' Xi management style in their diariesBut if the social status of the parents is inadvertently revealed, the teacher may feel embarrassed and do not know how to evaluate it.
Exams have just ended, and students' grades may not be ideal. The mother exerted Xi pressure on the students, and the father became the student's diary"Object of criticism"："Her father couldn't control her mother and pestered her all day long"。In the case of another student's family, this student's summary is clearly off-topic and not worth imitating.
In these interesting diaries, the innocent nature of the students is revealed. Due to their young age, they do not yet have a deep understanding of the meaning of concealment and disguise. Whether it's through written transcripts or verbal expressions, they express themselves sincerely, even though it can sometimes be embarrassing for them.
Parents and teachers can usually accurately grasp the expressions of these innocent and cute elementary school students. For example, when the teacher reads"The small fish drowned"They laughed enthusiastically and warmly reminded primary school students to remember the basics and avoid misinformation or jokes.
There are also some students who write the contents of the diary boring and boring. After all, students have limited vocabulary and cognitive levels, and journaling in the lower grades can be seen as a hint, while students in the upper grades can easily cope with tasks such as essays because they have already laid a solid foundation.
A low score does not mean that a student has low emotional intelligence, one student wrote in his diary:"I'm going to give the teacher a bag with a big brand"is an example. Although the twist at the end indicates that the teacher was finally chosen to give it to him, this expression made the teacher feel warm, and the parents also praised it after reading it"You're such a thoughtful child"。
A typical diary often describes a series of events to:"I'm happy"Come to an end. Teachers are troubled by this cookie-cutter approach, while parents feel that students' writing needs to be improved and encourage them to write more about characters and plots.
One student learned the trick of not writing about her father and mother in her diary, but instead replacing the protagonist with her sister, describing her experience as a maid when her sister's friends visited. It's a unique way of expression, but when you think about it, it seems to resonate a lot. It is common for students who have older sisters at home to be instructed to do this by their older sisters, so it seems natural to write such a picture in their diary, and students seem to be happy to do so.
Sometimes, the real words that come out of the mouths of schoolchildren are not offensive. This can show tolerance for children. Next, the schoolboy wrote his"Sister-in-law", I don't know if my sister-in-law will be a ** elementary school student after watching it.
My family has no money!"This classmate expressed his fear of touching his sister-in-law's nose vividly and interestingly, and wrote very well. Although the sister-in-law may have been furious, it is undeniable that this diary is commendable for its stark contrast to the simple records of other students.
Elementary school students' diary writing is either too exaggerated or too bland, so how can we effectively guide them to gradually improve their writing?
Journaling is a technical task, and some students are brilliant in their writing, while others struggle to grasp the essence of the text, leading parents to consider having them rewrite it. Tearing up the diary outright can make the student feel down;A better approach is to start with the content and help students choose a specific event and describe it in detail.
Parents can give appropriate guidance when necessary. For example, when reviewing a student's diary, you might ask if there are more appropriate words to express the sentence, or ask if a boring declarative sentence could be rewritten into a more expressive rhetorical question. This kind of instruction not only broadens students' writing ideas, but also accumulates more knowledge of sentence expression.
Reading is an important way to improve your writing, but you can't make students see reading as a chore. Parents can guide students to choose interesting books, preferably by reading them with their students and sharing interesting parts of the books with each other. Through these interactions, students will gradually become interested, so that they will have more courage to write, and their writing skills will gradually improve.
Today's topic: Did you write a diary in elementary school?