【Essay Title】Essay: My School Bag
[Examination of the topic].
First of all, we want to make it clear that the theme of this essay topic is about "My School Bag". When reviewing the question, we need to pay attention to the key words "my" and "school bag" in the question. This topic requires us to describe our school bag, including its appearance, function, features, etc. At the same time, since it is "my school bag", we need to express our emotions and opinions about the school bag from a personal perspective.
[Idea].
When it comes to ideas, we can think from multiple perspectives. First of all, you can start with the design of the schoolbag and describe its color, pattern, material, etc. Secondly, you can introduce the functions and characteristics of the school bag, such as the size of the capacity, the design of the compartment, the waterproof performance, etc. In addition, we can also express our deep feelings for the bag by telling the story in the bag or what it means to us.
[Fan Wen].
My school bag
I have a very special school bag, which is not only my school supplies, but also a good partner on my way to growth.
My bag is dark blue with my favorite character – The Little Prince. This pattern makes the otherwise ordinary school bag look special, and every time I see it, I feel a sense of intimacy and pleasure. In addition to its unique appearance, my bag has many practical features. It has a large capacity main bag that holds all my textbooks and workbooks. The interior is well-designed for easy sorting and sorting. In addition, there are two small pockets on the side of the bag that can be used to hold a water cup and an umbrella, which is very convenient.
Most importantly, this bag has accompanied me through many unforgettable moments. I remember one time, I forgot to bring my homework book because I was careless, and I was as anxious as an ant on a hot pot. Just when I was at a loss for anything, it was a spare workbook in my bag that saved me. Since then, I have cherished the help and convenience that this bag has brought me.
Now, this schoolbag has been with me for three years. Although it has a somewhat worn appearance, it is still the best in my mind. It not only facilitated my study life, but also witnessed my growth and progress. I believe that in the future, my school bag will continue to accompany me and witness more beautiful moments.
[Teacher's Comments].
This essay is an excellent description of my school bag. The author narrates the story from three aspects: appearance, function and emotion, making the article rich and coherent. By telling stories related to school bags, deep feelings for school bags are expressed. On the whole, this article has a clear theme, novel ideas, vivid expressions, and sincere feelings, which is a good article worth recommending.