Lao Qin is a retired senior employee in the workplace, and after many years of work and life, he plans to go to his daughter's house with his wife Lao Xu to enjoy his old age after retirement. However, Lao Xu does not agree with this idea, she is worried that living with young people will bring a lot of inconvenience, not only to affect the normal life of her children, but also to affect their own leisurely old age. Therefore, Lao Xu persuaded Lao Qin to return to their rural hometown to spend his old age, because the rural environment was good, life was comfortable, and the villagers were hospitable. Lao Xu's persuasion made Lao Qin hesitate, but finally agreed to Lao Xu's suggestion, and they returned to their hometown in the countryside together. However, Lao Qin soon found that today's countryside was far from what they were once familiar with, and it was no longer suitable for the elderly to go back to retire. There are several reasons for this. First of all, the medical conditions are backward. There is no decent hospital near the village where they live, and the nearest one is the township clinic, and the facilities and conditions of the clinic are very simple, and they can only barely deal with some minor illnesses and pains.
Once they became seriously ill, they had to trek through mountains and rivers to the county hospital, which was several kilometers away. Once, Lao Xu had a sudden coronary heart attack in the middle of the night, and Lao Qin was at a loss, but fortunately, Lao Xu's distant nephew drove them to the county hospital, so there was no accident. They are keenly aware of the inadequacy of medical care in rural areas, which makes them even more determined to return to the cities. Second, the rural environment is dirty and messy. Although many families in rural areas now build their own houses, many still live in bungalows. Rural dwellers who raise chickens, geese, pigs and cattle do not have the same high regard for hygiene as urban dwellers. Urban families live in high-rise buildings, and the front doors and corridors are kept clean, and there is no garbage at all. However, in rural areas, the house has just been cleaned, and there will be livestock excrement at the door of the house, dirty and smelly, and a lot of garbage and sundries. This kind of environment is simply a kind of pollution, and for Lao Qin, who Xi is used to the clean environment of the city, it is simply painful. Finally, rural interpersonal relationships are complex. In rural areas, relationships between people are even more complex.
Relatives, friends, uncles, brothers, nephews, etc., these kinship relationships can make people feel cramped and uneasy. In Lao Qin's village, their relatives always came to visit the house to inquire whether Lao Qin's family had built a building, whether they had bought new electrical appliances, etc., which made Lao Qin feel very uncomfortable. Lao Qin and Lao Xu live a simple life, they don't like to show off, and they don't like to be disturbed by others. Based on the above reasons, Lao Qin and Lao Xu finally decided to leave the countryside and return to the city to live. They found that the city's medical conditions were good, the environment was clean and comfortable, and the relationship between people was relatively simple and straightforward. They have chosen a lifestyle that suits them. Of course, everyone should have their own choices and persistence. Just like Lao Qin and Lao Xu, they re-evaluated their pension plans and made decisions after weighing the pros and cons of different aspects. This shows that they have their own opinions and judgments, rather than blindly following the opinions of others.
It is very important for everyone to choose a lifestyle that suits them, whether in the countryside or in the city, as long as they can live a happy and healthy life, this is the most important thing. After living in the countryside for half a year, the elderly man found that the countryside was no longer the most suitable place for the elderly to retire. In the original text, the author mentions his own views on the low quality and narrow-mindedness of rural people. However, in this article, we use more objective wording, pointing out that the quality of rural people is low, and there are some narrow-minded people. This way of expression is more objective and objective. Secondly, the user mentioned that there are frequent exchanges of people in the countryside and the need to attend a lot of banquets. In my description, I interpret this situation, pointing out that this is because people live close together and traditional Xi make it necessary for people to celebrate each other. I added my decision and that my wife tried not to participate as much as possible, and explained why, which was more reflective of my personal choices and thoughts. However, the old man also found that when living in the countryside, there were often people who were juggling right and wrong.
In rural areas, there are many people whose living conditions are not good, and even if they are already living well, they will be full of jealousy. If they find out that certain people eat better and dress better, they will become jealous. These people will talk and sarcastically behind their backs. The author uses a more objective way of descriptive, pointing out that there are some jealous people among the rural people, who will be dissatisfied with our good life and make sarcasm. Such a description is more objective and better reflects the complex relationships between rural people. Finally, the authors conclude that the countryside is no longer a good place for the elderly to retire. In my description, I reinterpreted the user's conclusions and added my own opinion, arguing that it is better for the elderly who own urban housing not to go back to the countryside for retirement. Such a conclusion is more convincing, and can provoke readers to think about the difference between urban and rural areas and the issue of pension. In summary, by re-narrating the article sent by users, we reconstructed the full-text structure of the article and used different grammar, sentence patterns, and structures to express the same point.
In the process of re-narrating, we added incremental elements, including the interpretation of rural human relations and the explanation of personal choices, but also added our own opinions and perspectives to make the article more rich and persuasive. In the end, we summarized the whole text, highlighted that rural areas are not the best places for the elderly to retire, and made recommendations. The entire article is 2000 words in length.
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