I don't usually do much couplets, but a few years ago, with the encouragement of Brother Warren, I learned the rules of couplets, tried to pair a few pairs, and it was plain, and then I didn't pay much attention to couplets.
When the time entered the year, Brother Warren sent me a message, inviting me to participate in the symposium of the Guanyang County Poetry Association, after receiving the news, I was a little worried, worried that my strength and works were not enough, not enough to join such an association. But Warren encouraged me, so I decided to see the world in the spirit of learning.
At the meeting, I met several seniors in the poetry industry in Guanyang County, and learned about the current situation and some other information in the poetry industry in Guanyang County, which touched me a lot.
Soon after the meeting, the Guanyang County Union campaign, which had been interrupted for three years due to the epidemic, reopened.
In the past, I might have thought of it as a message, and I would have read it and forget it.
But after the symposium, I felt that I should participate in this activity and do something for the development of Guanyang's couplets.
There are five comparisons in the alliance, and I am seriously right.
Let's not talk about whether my couplet is good or not, I will write out some of my thoughts when the couplet, throw bricks and lead jade, welcome everyone to comment on the couplet, what is good, what is still insufficient, point it out one by one, discuss with each other, which is very helpful to improve my couplet level. I also hope that more people can see it, so as to understand the couplet, like the couplet, devote themselves to the couplet, expand the team of the couplet in Guanyang County, and improve the influence of the couplet in Guanyang County.
There are a total of five comparisons in the United Nations, and I will introduce them in five phases. Let's start with the upper part of the first couplet:If you want to be a Penglai immortal, climb to the top of the treasure.
Baogai Peak in Shanglian, that is, the top of Baogai Mountain, Baogai Mountain, is the main peak of the Ocean Mountain Range and the second highest peak of Guanyang. Therefore, it is better to use the place name of Guanyang as the next link.
Penglai is not only a place name, but also a place where the legendary gods live. Therefore, it is also necessary to find such a place to correspond.
After careful consideration, I completed a couplet:
If you want to be a Penglai immortal, climb to the top of the treasure.
Xindang Langyuan guest, happy to explore thousands of families.
Langyuan is a place name in Langzhong City, Sichuan Province, and it is also the residence of the legendary gods. Qianjiayuan, that is, Qianjiadong, according to historical records, is the birthplace of the Yao people in the world. Experts still have different opinions on whether Qianjiadong is in the end.
With Qianjiadong to Baogai Mountain, Langyuan to Penglai, place name to place name, fairyland to fairyland, not leaking.
The "Xindang" and "Le Tan" in the lower link, corresponding to the "want to make" and "Gordon" in the upper link, also complement each other one after the other.
The level and part of speech of this union are also correct. The level is as follows:
Ping Ping, Ping Ping;
It's mediocre, it's mediocre.
It's a good couplet! As for whether it's good or not, let's comment on it.
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