A good poem has its "poetic realm", and the "poetic realm" comes from the poet's "state of mind". As a poet, he has his own inspiration, ingenuity, knowledge, experience, and charm; To read a good poem, you must have "enlightenment", that is, to enter the poet's "state of mind" from the "poetic realm", which is the cognition of the poet's inspiration, ingenuity, knowledge, experience, and charm. Read a poem, get one, self-sufficient.
Watch a puppet show
Wang Yiqun
There was no joy or anger, and the hands were raised and solemnly applauded.
It's ridiculous that there are many puppets in the world, I don't know who is the matchmaker?
The sadness of most people is that they can easily become puppets of others, at the mercy of others. What's even more sad is that I don't even know who the matchmaker is. Alert and intriguing. (Guiqiao).
Climb to the top of Paradise Village
Duan Wei
The Jianghuai wind meets, and the heat disperses firewood and smoke.
The clouds wipe the glass day, and the piano exercises the waterfall strings.
The mountain flowers once spit flames, and the revolution burned the prairie early.
The cliffs and rocks run like horses, who wields the whip?
Images such as clouds, pianos, mountain flowers, cliffs and rocks are all endowed with spirituality by the poet, so they are lifelike and full of human feelings. (Guiqiao).
Yong, Beijing Nanjiao Village Ancient Mill
Wang Li
Crush the chaff to the soul, and crush it into a beautiful moon dusk.
He has long known the five grains and is a godsend, and wants to borrow thousands of research to feast on the grace of the earth.
The broom is light and the family has send, and the swallow has no trace of the stone for a long time.
Now I no longer work hard, and quietly look at Nanjiao Village.
Grinding to the soul", "grinding into beauty", "early understanding", "want to borrow", "hard work" and "scrutiny" are deep and muddy, giving the stone grinding human nature, and intellectually transforming the stone mill, thus constituting a three-dimensional poetic realm. (Guiqiao).
Recall after-sales service on the way
Wang Jianqiang
A car and a companion are only in a hurry, and the journey is six years.
Spring Mountain outside the gate often recalls, peach blossoms burned into the sunset red.
The visual focus of "peach blossoms" is rendered with "sunset", and the red is dyed to the extreme with "burning", and the magnificent scenery wins with style. (Guiqiao).
The drunken wine shop also meets a flower tree
Gao Yuhan
The buttress of the wall slumped like a canopy. The dough is fragrant and red.
They all meet without restraint, looking up to the sky and laughing in the spring breeze.
Drunk and uninhibited, indulgent and wild, not only drunk and like, but also vividly express his expression. (Guiqiao).
Twilight of spring
Lemay Temple
The moss is also Chen. The slanted window sat for a long time to escape the spring.
The imperial city has been scarlet for more years, and the flowers are looking up to people.
Poets have many feelings of praising spring, cherishing spring, and hurting spring, but this poem wants to escape spring. From the poet's attitude towards spring, it can be seen that he is tired of the flashy world, and the "scarlet" and "exhaustion" are profound! (Guiqiao).
Sleepless questions
Cheng Jiao
The cold of the year has disappeared, and the twenty-four flowers are tidal.
I am ashamed to feel defenseless, and I am in sleeping pills.
have stroked their palms", "flowers are tide", but "unruly" has "no sense of inch", "what? Worried, why worry, did not answer, ended with "Sleeping pills in Fei Chunxiao", the situation came out of itself. (Guiqiao).
Spring
Zhu Zhaozhi
The new road is slanted, and the green is mixed everywhere.
The east wind is the most amorous, and it provokes peach blossoms to neem flowers.
From peach blossoms to neem flowers, there are twenty-four flowers here, and the word "provoked" is indeed "the most amorous". Don't paint the spring scene, only say the east wind, and get the purpose of graceful and meandering. (Guiqiao).
Mountain snow
Wang Yuancun
In the twilight years, there is no snow, and the cold mountains are uneven.
I envy the white head, and there will be a time to turn green.
The white head of the snow-capped mountain, the sense of the Internet of Things, the wonder is in Tobixing. (Guiqiao).
South Window Day Lessons
Shang Jin
Qingfeng invited the house, and several cases were opened.
A little Zhilan Qi, when can it be cultivated.
Avoiding the real and attacking the false, the beginning and the end are new, not only the meaning is subtle, but the text is also very round. (Guiqiao).
Personal biography:
The young man once herded cattle on the bank of the willow stream and collected wages in the field of the peach forest; If you want to stick to your heart and return to natural purity, you will have the nickname of Guiqiao. likes to read poetry, occasionally once; It's good to graffiti, talk about temperament.
Reviewer: Guiqiao, Editor: Zhang Xuefang, Proofreader: Feng Xiao