Li Xiniu.
Sanxi was born in the countryside, grew up in the countryside, and taught in the countryside, and formed an indissoluble bond with the countryside. He is loyal to the party's education cause, willing to serve as a ladder for others, and cultivates pillars as his duty; He also has a soft spot, loves literature, and insists on amateur creation.
Sanxi is a rural teacher who has been working and living in the Yuan District for a long time. He is full of affection and passion for the mountains and rivers, cultural landscapes, local customs and pastoral scenery here, all of which are deeply imprinted. He used his spare time to go deep into life, immerse himself in writing, express life, and understand life. Acura praises the yellow earth, carries forward the national spirit, and creates many vivid stories and colorful life pictures and artistic images. Throughout his works, the connotation is rich, bright and fresh, subtle and profound, plain and natural. The ideological and artistic qualities are particularly good, and they are worth reading and appreciating.
1. Intention of loess, depicting the loess feelings, depicting the beautiful scenery of mountains and rivers, and praising the pastoral scenery.
Sanxi loved Gaotang Plateau, which was the birthplace of the Weihua Uprising. The blood-stained land and the red gene induced his passion for life and inspiration for writing, and he wrote poems. Such as "Into the New Era", "Yellow Earth", "Early Summer Village", "Picturesque Campus", "Harvest", "Birdsong" and other refreshing poems. The yellow earth was enthusiastically sung, reflecting the picture and situation of the spiritual changes, beautiful life and economic revitalization of the people in the plateau area. It celebrates the new era and new look.
In the poem "Yellow Earth", the author first wrote: "The lake on the loess has waves, the small river bends and bends the ditches and ditches, the persimmons are fragrant, the fragrant apples usher in the pavilion, the singing on the platform floats around, and falls into the sparkling and beautiful lake." Small rivers, ditches, persimmons, apples, songs, river water, etc., show the fragrance and beauty of the yellow earth. He affectionately wrote about "the yellow earth where the drums shook the sky". Next, he describes the yellow earth: "The mud swallows chirp in the loess soil, the bees fly, the flying gulls jump around on the beach, the chirping chickens chirp to the sky, the chirping chickens flutter their wings to wake up the sleeping earth, the earth shakes and falls, and the flowers are in full bloom", thus describing "the yellow earth where shadow puppets turn". Then he wrote vividly and vividly, "The Yangge of the Yellow Earth carries the wind, drunk the Yellow Earth, and the square dance of the Yellow Earth jumps and jumps, jumping to the heart", and the word "drunk" activates the sweetness, beauty and joy of people's lives. Square dancing is a popular collective entertainment activity, which enlivens the cultural life of the masses. The last sentence "Thank you for the new era!" Thank you for your beautiful and happy life! "Putting the finishing touch, breaking the topic clearly. It praises the party's wise and correct leadership and the policy of benefiting the people, and praises the new era.
The whole poem vividly describes the beautiful scenery and pastoral scenery of the Sichuan Plateau, showing the natural beauty of birds and flowers, the natural beauty of spring and autumn fruits and the joy of victory, and is full of the atmosphere of rural life.
2. Cleverly conceived, novel materials, vivid and vivid descriptions, reflecting campus life and expressing the true feelings of teaching.
Sanxi is a teacher. The campus living environment has become an important gene that induces his artistic creation, and based on these real-life materials, he has written many poems, showing a variety of campus life scenes to all walks of life. The most outstanding is his "Love in the Rural Primary School", in which he wrote: "The hair is not over the mountain The black waterfall falls into the twisted bucket In the true love Let the gum Ferment in the picturesque apricot grove The old hunchback is the elder who rings the love song tonight Love is also sprinkled Meaning is also sprinkled A nest of bamboos adds infinite scenery Quiet rain Washing the fluttering willows Under an umbrella The story drips into the dirt in the rain Farewell can't say goodbye clearly In her sleep, the village female teacher is still lyrical" The poem reflects the ordinary campus life, The image of a rural teacher has been created and a beautiful artistic conception has been created: in the campus, the water is twisted with a wheel, the apricot grove with green trees, the dense bamboo, and the silk rain curtain, in such a specific environment, the rural female teacher is expressing her deep love.
Picking up the waves in real life, embellishing and weaving a typical living environment, let this rural female teacher express her feelings to the fullest. This kind of artistic conception is beautiful and very far-reaching, and this kind of artistic sublimation makes life more typical. Make the artistic image of the work more lofty, perfect, and more artistically appealing.
3. The form is flexible and changeable, free and unrestrained, the style is simple and plain, and the expression technique is surprisingly successful, which enhances the momentum of the work.
Sanxi's poetry is dominated by modern poetry, also known as free verse. The format is broad, and the length of sentences and numbers is not limited, which is easy to control. With concise and subtle language, bright and changing rhythm, harmonious and smooth rhythm, image and beautiful artistic conception to reflect social life, express thoughts and feelings. For example, the poem "Lift My Pen" has four sections, and the sentence structure of each stanza is completely consistent, which is the "four, three, three, four" mode, which is easy to read and easy to read. There are also uneven chapters, with different numbers of sentences and words in each section, such as the poem "Mother" has three verses, and the first verse has three sentences, which are respectively "seven, five, four"; The second section has six sentences, which are "763734"; The third section has four sentences, which are respectively "five, six, five, eight". It seems that the poetry is free and lively, sonorous and powerful, full of rhythm and beauty.
Sanxi's poetry is good at using a variety of rhetorical devices, and the artistic images are more vivid and thought-provoking. For example, the poem "Father" uses metaphors to create the image of an old cadre who works hard and retires. In the poem, the face of the "father" is compared to an apple, the gray hair of the "father" is compared to a white cloud, and the back of the "father" is compared to a book that cannot be opened. These metaphors are appropriate and vivid, and they play a very important role in shaping the image of the character. The use of the comparison technique lists many characteristics, showing the characteristics of the image from many aspects. For example, the sentence "ripples and waves roll in layers" in "The Sound of Birds", and the sentence "Acacia flowers spit a charming fragrance and acacia flowers spit an intoxicating fragrance" in "The Fragrance of Sophora Flowers" all have this effect.
In "Two Walks to Qiachuan", the rhetorical technique of the thimble is used as a whole, such as "Watching the water waves on the strange stone pavilion, the rippling water waves, the rippling reeds fluttering to the nose, the birds flying over, flying through time and space, watching King Wen of Zhou and Taiji fall in love with each other, the Qinghe pomegranates who love each other gather at the Yiren Bridge, and the wind blows across the 10,000 acres of reeds", so that the poems are successive from beginning to end, up and down, lyrical and freehand, with a fresh style, such as flowing clouds and water, momentum through, interlocking, fascinating.
Another example is the poem "Visiting Nanhu Park in Late Spring". "The safflower grains are full, the pink flowers are clustered, the red leaves are clustered and the carpet is spread, a look at the lake is like a mirror, a look at the lake is like a mirror, the upper floor of the champion pavilion floor, the upper layer of the champion pavilion, the pebble bridge, the pebble bridge, the lovers on the autumn wind pavilion are nestled against each other" ......The whole poem describes the whole process and cheerful mood of the spring trip to Nanhu Park. It describes the natural beauty of thousands of purples and thousands of reds, the bright spring and winding paths, the water and the sky, and the state of mind that is not happy. The writing is smooth, with ups and downs. The performance is surprisingly successful. Contemporary palindromic poetry, a precedent for modern vernacular palindromic poetry.
In the poem "Walking through the Yuquan Temple", "My footsteps walked through the Yuquan Temple, and the jade jingle spread along the stone road with the footsteps," "Ah! Yuquanyuan You are the unloading saddle and saddle of Huashan", "Gao Xiang bypassed the head of the Taoist master and shook my crutches and laughed", "Ah, Yuquanyuan Yuquanyuan easily hugged loosely", etc., the words "footsteps", "saddle", "head" and "pine" overlap in a poem to play catchy, and the poetry expands the capacity of the poem, which is beautiful.
Fourth, carefully temper the language, enhance the connotation of expression, and strive to be concise, far-reaching, and accurate and precise in the language.
First, for example, in the sentence "Looking down on the golden scenery of wheat and inlaid into the beautiful landscape gallery" in "Harvest", the word "inlay" vividly expresses the scene of wheat harvest in summer, arousing people's rich imagination. Second, the metaphorical image is appropriate. For example, in the sentence "A piece of chalk, a world, the greatness of a lifetime, enlarged in the pupil of the writer's eyes", the word "pupil" actually contains a world and covers a person's life. Its coverage is not broad, and its artistic conception is not far-reaching. Third, make good use of the looping sentence pattern to form an artistic effect of continuous looping. For example, in the poem "Harvest", "the yellow gold waves that rise and fall from time to time are stacked layer upon layer in the minds of the peasants and in the hearts of the peasants to set off the waves and sleep happily", the words "layer upon layer, layer upon layer" go back and forth to deepen people's feelings about the summer harvest scenery. This kind of circular sentence expression has a certain artistic appeal.
Sanxi poetry has put a lot of effort into the refinement of language and the use of various rhetorical formats. The connotation of poetry is richer and more vivid, and the fun is endless, which is worthy of admiration and appreciation.
Sanxi's poetry is quite distinctive, unique, has won the attention of all walks of life, and is deeply recognized and loved by the majority of readers.