Do you think The Old Man and the Sea is only for reading? Far more than that

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In the process of reading, we followed Santiago to the sea every day, witnessing the firm eyes and unyielding spirit of an old man, as well as the unconditional trust and touching friendship between the old man and the little boy.

Man can be destroyed, but not defeated”。The old man's voice seemed to be still ringing in his ears.

At the end of the story, Santiago, dragging his tired body, falls asleep in his house, and he dreams of lions. This is where the story comes to an abrupt end.

But what happens next?？Time goes on, and there must be a story going on.

I believe that children who have read this book will have countless sequels in their minds for it.

So, of course, we have to arrange it for everyone, the story of "The Old Man and the Sea", weThere is no deliberate setting of specific roles for the children, just a witness to the old man and the sea.

Well, let's try it, after reading this book, what unknown possibilities will happen, or what expectations can be fulfilled in the continuation?

Let's say your character is a little boy, the little boy who is bent on going to sea with the old man, what will you do when the old man recovers from his injuries?

I think we must have gone fishing together. So how to present the storyline of going out to sea to fish to be more exciting?

That's where we come inThe secret of the eight characters in the storytelling modeGoal-Difficulty-Action-Result.

On a sunny morning, you and San Diego set out, for a fisherman who had just returned from fishing told you that about ten miles from the island there had been a school of sailfish swimming for days, and that they seemed to be attracted to something, and had been reluctant to leave.

You can't help but get excited when you think of the beautiful fins that glitter like buntings and the sharp mouth that looks like an awl.

Well, catch a nice sailfish, yesYour goalsFinish.

Santiago just sat quietly, he knew in his heart that if he wanted to catch a sailfish, the odds were not very good, knowing that this fish could reach speeds of up to 110 kilometers per hour, he was silently thinking about countermeasures.

Once you've landed at the location, you'll soon see schools of fish as they weave through the water in schools, and your excitement is palpable.

But how can an ordinary hook catch this sharp-mouthed sailfish?

Santiago thought as he took out his fishing rod, the bait was made by chopping the head of the marlin that Santiago had dragged back, Santiago made it himself, and you expertly attached it to the hook.

The wait was so long that you almost fell asleep, so Santiago took out the pike, which had been made from the spring blades of an old Ford car, and gently wiped it.

At this moment, the fishing gear suddenly tightened, and the fishing rope creaked, and Santiago stabbed the spear in his hand into the water with lightning speed, once, twice, and three times, but he failed to stab him.

So obviously, weEncounter difficultiesFinish.

The sailfish is fast, flexible, and has a peculiar structure, making it difficult to catch, which is the difficulty encountered in this fishing.

So, what to do when you encounter difficulties? The next step in our eight-character secret is action.

You cooperate with each otherThat's itaction

The boat swayed to Santiago's movements, and as they stopped, the line tightened and the line became shorter and shorter, and the beautiful sailfish came to light, coming to a halt about 20 centimeters above the surface.

You and Santiago look at each other in understanding, and he points to your spear and then to the front of the swordfish, and you nod your head.

So, you pick up the spear in your hand and stab it in front of the swordfish, and when it turns around and turns to the rear, Santiago's spear stabs down hard, piercing its body from the left part of the fin.

The old man pulls his spear and picks up the swordfish with all his might, and you cleverly tighten the line.

While the swordfish was struggling, you quickly stepped forward and reversed the part of the spear leaking behind the old man, and the spear-pierced swordfish fell into the cabin from the air.

Looking at the beautiful sailfish in the cabin, you jumped up excitedly, this is your honor, this is the result of the tacit understanding between you and Santiago, and perhaps, it is the good luck that the big marlin brings you.

Dragging the fruits of victory, you proudly walk in front of Santiago, and despite the effort, you don't care until your mother sees your booty, until you see the approval that sparkles in her eyes.

You know, Mom will never stop you from going fishing with Santiago in the future, and the pride in your heart is surging like a wave at this moment.

Up here,The results are clear。You see:

The goal is: Difficulty in catching a sailfish is: Sailfish moves quickly and quickly, Difficult to catch action is: The result of your cooperation with Santiago is: Successfully catch a fish Writing Eight Character Secret: Wish - Difficulty - Action - Result

And there is an explanation for the little boy in the main story who wants to go fishing with Santiago, and there is also an explanation for the mother's attitude towards the little boy following Santiago to fish. It isA Chinese-style happy ending

Then there can't beOther different continuationsIs it? Can't you play other roles?

Of course. And we can also add some essay points to your continued story. That isHow to make an article longer

It's actually very simple, we can add some more plot to your continued story, whether it's before they go out to fish, or during the fishing trip, or after.

Don't underestimate this composition point, many children are writing when they areNot enough words, is also very helpless.

For example: this time you're a member of the Coastal Lifesaving Team.

It could be a storyline of a little boy and Santiago catching a fish, but what's next?

The boy's mother still didn't approve of him following Santiago to fish, so he sailed out into the deep sea with another young fisherman from the village.

The agreed seven days are a point in time, and they will return regardless of whether they have a harvest or not, but on the ninth day, there will be no shadow of them on the sea.

And you, as a member of the Coast Guard, sailed to the blue sea with a search and rescue boat, and Santiago heard about it, and set off silently with his own fishing boat.

Your boat is almost side by side, looking at the worry in the old man's eyes, you silently make a wish in your heart, hoping that the little boy will be safe.

More than forty miles from the coast, you see a small boat, a boat that has been attacked by sharks, lying precariously at sea, with seawater already filling the cabin.

They seemed to have been through some kind of battle, the oars on the deck were broken, the little boy had a bloody streak on his shoulder, and another fisherman's arm was bleeding from a shark's bite.

The young fisherman seemed to be dying, and the little boy waved his hand excitedly when he saw the old man's boat, and the old man's eyes glistened with tears.

You quickly put the raft on the rescue boat into the sea, and Santiago pushed the raft to the side of the little boy's boat with his oars, and quickly jumped into the sea and swam to the little boy's boat.

Looking at the old man's steady posture, you didn't have time to be moved, so you immediately put down the chains on the ship and slid down the chains to the little boy's boat.

The little boy tried to help, but he found that the best thing he could do at the moment was to take care of himself, so he climbed onto the raft and used his arm to secure it to his fishing boat.

You and Santiago carry the young fisherman onto the raft, tie the rope in front of the raft to the chain at the back of the rescue boat, gesture to the crew, and set off.

At this time, the old man also returned to his boat, and followed the rescue boat back to the village.

The mother, who was waiting on the shore, wept bitterly when she saw the child who had returned safely, and at the same time she saw the wet Santiago, she understood everything.

Since then, she no longer stands in the way of the little boy, although she can't understand the deep affection between the two old friends, but through your narration and everything she sees, she chooses to support the little boy's choice.

So, on that sunny morning, the little boy and Santiago sailed out into the deep sea in a fishing boat.

You see:Some challenges and difficulties have been added, the number of words has increased, and the plot has become more exciting.

So,The routine of continuing the story is simple, add some storyline, pay attention to the main line of the story in the text and the blank space at the end, as long as the general direction does not deviate, your imagination, coupled with your own rich language, must be a wonderful good article.

By the way, in this sequel, I also used itGrass snake gray lineIn the main story, the head of the big marlin caught by Santiago, they chopped it up to make bait, and we could add it when we continued to write.

The boy mentions that he wants to use the spring pieces of old Ford cars to make pike darts heads, whether they are also used to catch sailfish. It's about getting the details in the middle of the reading, so that the story can be continuedMore coherent and more exciting

The story of "The Old Man and the Sea", the continuation of Teacher Miao Miao's demonstration is here.

Children are born with a rich imagination, which adults can't match in any way, and we look forward to your wonderful sequel.

This is He Miao reading, and I am Miao Miao. We'll see you next time.