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In the original title] Dream of Red Mansions, Xue Baochai once composed a song "Linjiang Immortal" with willow catkins, and the words are as follows:
The spring dance in front of the white jade hall is unraveled, and the east wind rolls evenly. The bees and butterflies were in chaos. How many times have passed with the water, how can it be entrusted to the dust? Thousands of threads will never change, let him gather and divide as he goes. Shaohua Xiu laughed without roots, and the good wind relied on his strength to send me to Qingyun!
One of the important reasons why catkins can fly into the sky is "light".
What are your thoughts on this?
Requirements: Do not deviate from the scope of the content and meaning of the material, choose a good angle, set your own intention, write a title, write a proposal, do not pretend, and do not plagiarize; No less than 800 words.
[Analysis of ideas].
Writing Instruction] This question tests the student's writing ability. This is a quotation-style material essay question. The composition material is a poem by Xue Baochai in "Dream of Red Mansions". This poem is a piece of text, focusing on describing the situation of the wind fluttering and dancing leisurely. In the next film, the words and aspirations of the catkins are expressed. After the material, it was explained that "one of the important reasons why catkins can fly into the sky one after another is 'light'". This sentence limits the scope of writing, that is, we cannot write words and content in a rambling manner, or analyze the reasons why catkins fly to the sky from other angles, but only analyze it from the perspective of its "lightness". Combined with the category of words, Yongwu is for the sake of speech. Writing about how catkins fly to the sky is actually writing about how people realize their ideals. The catkins are "light" in order to "go to the clouds" with the power of "good wind", and in the same way, people should also be "light" if they want to realize their ideals. The "light" here should be to unload the burden, including the ideological burden, the spiritual burden, the fame and fortune burden, etc.; It also refers to the removal of fame and fortune, vanity, etc.; It can also refer to having a good attitude and lifting weights lightly. Only by throwing away these external "burdens" can we travel lightly and have more physical strength, time and energy to do a good job in order to achieve our goals.
In addition, the poems in the contact materials, catkins can fly to the sky, not only because of "lightness", but also because of "good wind". "Lightness" is the internal reason for catkins to fly into the sky, and it is "one of the important reasons", while "good wind" is an important external condition. Combined with the background of the new era, "good wind" can metaphorically refer to the wave of the new era under the "great changes unseen in a century". This is an era full of opportunities and challenges, and it is a "good wind" for young people to draw on. In this sense, "good wind" is a platform or opportunity for young people to display their ambitions, and good wind can be provided by the state, society, the collective, or others.
When writing, it is necessary to draw a point of view from the prompts in the material, and to think closely about the internal and external reasons why "catkins" can fly into the sky, that is, a person can achieve his ideals. To write from the perspective of "light", you can start from the multi-layered meaning of "light", and use the juxtaposition to list the sub-arguments and discuss the reasons why life should be "light". It is also possible to start from a certain meaning of "light", and conduct in-depth arguments on contacts, society, and countries layer by layer. Writing from the perspective of "good wind", it is necessary to use the examples of characters in the new era, and the growth of people is inseparable from a good environment. But the focus should still be on the "light" angle.
[Example].
Indifferent to fame and fortune, "light" forward, quiet and far-reaching
If people want to achieve their goals, they should also be indifferent to fame and fortune, and "light" to move forward, so that they can ride the big ship of the times and be quiet and far-reaching.
light", is a heart away from disturbing the mortal. Zhuge Liang lived in Nanyang, read poetry and books, felt nature, and eventually became a generation of celebrities; Lei Feng is bland, helpful, selfless dedication, and eventually becomes a model of the times; Shen Hao placed his affection on Xiaogang Village, devoted himself to the people, solved problems, and eventually became a pioneer of the times. If Zhuge Liang is bent on pursuing power and wants to have ** Houlu, how can he comprehend the realm of the unity of heaven and man? If Lei Feng wants to become a "first-class **" and give up doing good, how can he become a model for everyone to follow? If Shen Hao was eager for financial benefits and always chased the highest official position, how could he win the love and respect of his fellow villagers? Only by returning one's soul to peace can one become a "first-class people".
"light" is a kind of social atmosphere. Indifference can cultivate a good social customs and create a beautiful and harmonious society. The tranquility of one person can make a group of people go far. Wu Mengchao is immersed in liver research, and has taken medical ethics to patients one after another, and there is gradually a trend of "medical ethics first" in society; Bai Fangli devoted himself to charity and helped students with love, so more and more people began to follow the good deeds of the old man Bai Fangli. Only based on the lives of ordinary people will Wu Mengchao win people's praise, and people will take him as an example. Only by dedicating one's love and pursuing a plain life will Bai Fang Li become a hero in the hearts of future generations, and more Bai Fang Li will continue to emerge in society.
Only those who are "light" can move forward with weight. "The pro-virtuous ministers are far from the villain, and the reason why this ancestor Han is prosperous is also;The pro-villain Yuan Xianchen, the reason why the Han Dynasty fell into decline after that. "The true sages do not count the gains and losses, because they devote themselves to their cause;And the villain is harmless. Because they will only chase fame and fortune. Qian Xuesen gave up the high salary in the United States, resolutely returned to China, devoted himself to the scientific research of the motherland, and helped China's scientific and technological progress and national strength. Without a scientific giant like Qian Xuesen, who is indifferent and ambitious, how could he exchange for the rapid rise of the motherland?It is precisely because there are fewer idle people in society who are interested in fame and fortune that the country will continue to develop and prosper.
Of course, no matter how "light" the catkins are, if there is no "good wind", they will not be able to fly high in the sky. Even if a person is talented, if he does not meet the "best times" or does not have Bole appreciation, he may still be busy for life. Just like Jia Yi was summoned by Emperor Wen of the Han Dynasty, he just "didn't ask the common people to ask the ghosts and gods". Therefore, the "light" body also needs the help of "good wind". Just as the current wave of the information age has given birth to the live broadcast economy, rural experts have brought goods through live broadcasts, entered a well-off life, and developed the rural economy.
The plum blossom Ling Han bloomed alone, making people remember its indifference;Xiaocao's life of silent dedication has made people remember its tranquility;Tao Qian's love for Qiu Shan makes people remember his lofty. Return the heart to peace, so that it can achieve "indifferent to clear ambition, quiet to far-reaching". This is the real "light". We are fortunate to be born in the best era, when we first let ourselves be "light", and then rely on this "good wind" to rise to the clouds.