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The original title is presented] The extraordinary poplar tree lights up the world in front of Mao Dun, the father's back lights up Zhu Ziqing's understanding of father's love, and the mother's deep righteousness lights up the ...... of loyaltyIn life, there is always a power that lights us up like a lamp, a warm word in winter, a good book that enlightens wisdom, a teacher's criticism and encouragement, a parent's encouragement and comfort, or our own dreams and struggles. So, what lit you up on your way up?
Please write an essay on the topic "Light Me Up".
Requirements: Complete the question;Decide what you want;Stylistic choice;No less than 600 words;The name of the place, the name of the school, the name of the person, etc., that may reveal the candidate's information shall not appear in the text.
Best angle
Zhang Shuang, Chinese teacher at Changsha Yali Experimental Middle School
Writer Liu Yong said that "growing up is a beautiful pain", so there are many experiences worth remembering, singing and thinking about in growing up.
Growth essays are common in the examination room, family, friendship, dreams, hobbies, etc. are all things that often need to be faced and dealt with in growth
1.What is "lit up".The original meaning of "lighting up" is to ignite the fire, so that the light shines, which can be extended to influence, encouragement, warmth, etc., in the face of confusion someone points to me, in the face of failure someone comforts me, in helplessness someone pulls me, can be said to be "light".
2.What can be used to "light up".In the superficial sense, it should be a torch and other shiny things that can be lit, and the supplementary content can be richer or abstract, and it can be supplemented by people (tablemates, mothers, etc.), concrete objects (that book, sunflowers), a certain activity (that performance, a round of applause), and a certain special experience (setbacks, failures, efforts, perseverance, etc.).
3.Something that lights up "me"., that is, what needs to be lit?It must be a dark, unlit world, so don't forget how to light up "me" and what kind of positive impact the result of lighting up has given me.
To write this kind of essay, most candidates will choose to write it, such as: my mother lit me up, the teacher lit me up, lack of highlights, not novel enough, you can try to "switch angles", "clever use of rhetoric", "light and dark double lines" and other methods, by writing details, convey the main idea, and be better in concept.
Such as:1.Toggle the angle. If you want to write that the teacher or mother lit me up, you should grasp the typical details in typical events, such as "that encouragement lit me up", you can grasp the words of encouragement when the teacher talks to you, this word should break your previous unconfidence or other gloomy thoughts, and bring light to you; For example, "That affectionate gaze lit up me" can focus on a certain goodbye between you and your mother, and your mother's gaze is like the back of Zhu Ziqing's father, which shocks you, and even sighs that no matter how far you go, you can't get out of your mother's love.
2.Use rhetoric. Skillful use of rhetoric is to enhance the literary brilliance of the article, for example, if you want to care about your classmates, then you can skillfully use rhetoric, such as "the spring breeze lights me up", a good sentence is warm in three winters, even if it is a cold winter, the care or encouragement of classmates is like a spring breeze, bringing you the brightness of spring flowers to the frozen world.
3.Light and dark double lines. For example, some candidates write about their grandmothers, but not directly about their grandmothers, but about the sunflowers planted by their grandmothers, just like Mao Dun's "Praise of Poplars", giving the object a certain spiritual meaning.
Excellent work in the examination room
Bending over lit me up
Hu Lingxuan
Yale-China Experimental High School C2206
The cold wind swept up the dead branches and leaves, and people wrapped their coats tightly, walking in a hurry, a bleak and lonely scene.
The students stepped out of the school gate and stayed by the steaming shop to buy some food. And those remnants of the wrapping paper are scattered everywhere, and the last brilliant color in the cold winter wax moon is actually those colorful wrapping paper.
I also bought a meatloaf, hurried a few steps to the trash can, raised my hand, dropped my wrist, and threw it violently. Unfortunately, a cold wind blew and rolled the wrapper. It fluttered and flickered, like a lonely boat in the dark wind and waves, and finally trembled and shivered, swaying and moored on the ground next to the garbage can.
Go pick it up. I lifted my feet to take a step, but retracted again. Perhaps it was the cold wind that aroused inertia, and I hesitated, but gave up, and landed to the side, trying to continue on my way. Pressing down the slightest uneasiness in my conscience, I thought disapprovingly, this gray street is not lacking in such a piece of garbage as me.
Just as there is no shortage of garbage on the street, there is no shortage of people who bend down to pick up garbage on the dusty streets. And so she appeared. She bent down, picked up the piece of wrapping paper that I had discarded, got up, raised her hand, dropped her wrist, and returned the trash to the trash can. I could see that her somewhat old armband was embroidered with the words "Discipline Inspection Post", yellow on a red background, dark and old, but like a bright lamp, lighting up the long winter day and lighting me up.
The patty in my hand was a little hot, but nowhere near my cheeks. Shame welled up in my heart, and the guilt tightened little by little like a big hand clenching my neck. A few steps away, why can't I do it? Why don't I do it? And she bent down again to pick up another piece of trash. So now, what do I do? Her movements are like a lighthouse, lighting the way for me as I wander in a sea of confusion.
I also bent down, picked up a piece of trash next to me, got up, raised my hand, and dropped my wrist. Garbage falls into the trash. Bend down again, once again contribute to the dusty streets, once again light up you and me, light up the torch and warmth of winter.
Bending over, perhaps, is her duty to shirk. But that is the embodiment of quality and civilization. She bent down to lift the torch of civilization that lit others, and I took the torch and bent down to convey its warmth. The traditional virtues of the Chinese nation are contained in small actions and hidden in small actions. What we often sing about is all around us, in the bending over and over again in the harsh winter. The street lamps light up the roads, and the flame of civilization burning on the torch is passed by bending down, planting the seeds called civilization, lighting up the warmth, lighting up the winter, lighting up you and me, and lighting up civilization.
The cold wind can roll up the scattered branches and leaves, but it can't blow out the torches of civilization that light up the long winter days and warm you and me.
Bend down, light yourself up, light up everything.
Comments: Pay attention to detailssection, the writing angle is novel, and the small can see the big.
Love lights me up
Liu Sijia
Yale-China Experimental High School C2206
The clearest footprints are on the muddiest roads. ”
Epigraph I have been studying dance for 8 years, and it is very hard and tiring.
I remember that at that time, even the teacher was persuading me to give up dancing, "If my physical fitness is not good, I won't be able to go far." "In fact, my foot is born with an extra bone, I can't stand for a long time, walk long distances, and the most basic dance practice will make me feel unbearable pain, not to mention the restraint of dance shoes. But I never thought of giving up, I paid a lot of sweat but still could only get the teacher's indifference, I thought I was gray at that time, but my chase was not.
On that night, I was a teenager who returned home on a snowy night.
In the middle of the night in the cold winter, the snow fluttered sweat wet my back, and the bones of my feet began to ache faintly, the ordinary scene on weekdays made my blood cold by half, the indifference of the teacher in the past, the only third prize in the cold and the ridicule of my classmates, vividly, turned into a nail straight into my heart, and my chase seemed to become ethereal.
Is it worth it?", I couldn't help but ask myself for the first time, what exactly am I chasing, is talent worthless before I love it, and frustration almost swallows me up.
At this time, ** sounded, it was the familiar "On the Water Side", I couldn't help wiping away my tears, slowly standing on tiptoe, slowly stretching my arms, spinning, jumping, in the melodious **, I seemed to forget the rain and snow outside the window, and also forgot the entanglement in my heart.
Just like it. ”
In an instant, countless negative energies seemed to be impacted by the words in their hearts, and the nails in their hearts were vibrating violently and disappeared. Yes, I've worked hard, and no matter how big the setbacks are, I'm going to go through, aren't they? What if I don't get recognized, dance has always been my passion, I won't be defeated, I'll stand up and run into the distance, right? What about setbacks? It's not the frustration that overwhelms me, it's myself! Countless thoughts poured into my heart, filling the hole, my blood was dyed again, my life seemed to be lit up by love, the fog cleared, and I had no regrets.
Since then, I have never thought of giving up, although I have not won a higher award, I have not received more beautiful praise, but I will always remember the ** on a snowy night, the melodious melody and my movements, gave me hope.
Dream is a rush, and it is love that lights up my future.
Climbing mountains, flowing rapids, the long road that greets me may be doubtful, maybe negative, but love will give me the courage to go, to climb, to chase, to meet the light.
Maybe that's how love lasts a long time.
Comments: The article can write dreams from the perspective of "love", and the details are well grasped, and the details need to be better grasped.
The warm winter sun lit me up
Liang Qixia
Yale-China Experimental High School C2206
The winter wind is cold, the cold is coming, and the wind makes people shiver, I feel that the winter is bitter cold, but there is a sentence like a warm sun, which lights up my winter.
Successfully advanced! "With the last whistle blowing, our team successfully entered the knockout round as the group leader after the first few rounds of the group stage.
In the group stage, the players were in excellent form, winning all four group games, and accumulated great confidence for the next first knockout game. The "top four" must belong to us, and the joy in our hearts is self-evident.
On the day of the knockout round, the sky was clear, although it was still cold and windy, the players were not afraid of the cold after all, and they wore short-sleeved shorts to battle. I shouted loudly and cheered, for a while you chased me on the field, cheered off the field, and the scene of blood boiling was still fresh in people's memories.
Passing, why don't you pass? "Why didn't you enter?" "With the emergence of several mistakes, the score of our class has been disadvantaged, although the players on the field are still "fighting to the death", there have been complaints off the field.
In the end, the game was lost.
Full of reluctance and loss, everyone returned to the classroom in despair.
The sky that had just cleared up had become gloomy with our defeat, and maybe it would rain later, but no matter if it rained or not, our hearts would have been pouring rain for a long time, "Sure enough, this winter is still cold", I can't help but think.
When I returned to the class, I thought that the head teacher was going to criticize us, but she didn't expect to see that everyone was so disappointed, and said something to us: "Students, I understand everyone's feelings about losing the game at the moment, and I also know that everyone must be uncomfortable." But everyone is too focused on results, and the way our players fight the field, why not a victory? Although you lost the game, I think you won the youth! ”
If you lose the game, you win your youth", this sentence is like the warm sun in winter, giving people hope and warmth.
The emotions in my heart seemed to be gone......Yes, as long as you work hard in the process, what is the result, and what does it matter? The team members are running the field, and the students are shouting desperately off the field, isn't it a kind of victory?
I finally understood: the result is not the most important thing, the most important thing should be the process. Some of youth are failures, some are unsatisfactory, some are regrets and unwillingness, but when we grow up through experience, the song of youth will be extremely beautiful.
The warm words of the head teacher are like a bright light, dispelling the confusion and confusion in our growth, guiding me in the direction and bringing light.
Youth will eventually come to an end, and I will always miss this cold winter, always look forward to the group of teenagers who rushed to the blue frame, and always remember the warmth of the sentence "lost the game, won the youth".
Comments: The comfort and encouragement of the head teacher are written as the warm winter sun, and the material is exquisite.