In the final zero score essay, the teacher wants to give a full score but can't, and his thinking is far beyond his peers
High school life is full of tension and anxiety, the college entrance examination date is approaching day by day, and the long study road is daunting. This is not what is depicted in Youth Pain**, but the unfinished test papers, the unremitting supervision of teachers, the careful getting along with parents, and the open and secret battles between classmates. Do you like this kind of life?
High school is the most rigorous stage, especially when it comes to composition, we seem to know how to write high marks and master the art of singing about life, but sometimes the real inner expression is the most important thing.
There was an essay with a zero score at the end of high school that caught the teacher's attention, even though the teacher wanted to give a perfect score. This essay does not have flowery rhetoric, but it shows delicate emotions that go straight to the depths of the heart.
The essay begins with the student admitting that this is a completely off-topic essay, admitting that he just wants to write about his inner thoughts at random. His handwriting may not be pretty, even a little ugly, but it exudes a charm that makes people want to keep reading. The essay is entitled "How should I live this life?"
The student confessed that he had fallen asleep during the Chinese exam, was woken up by the head of the grade, and faced the inevitable criticism. He expressed his dislike for school and preferred to study freely at home. Disagreeing with his classmates, he thinks they are naïve.
He admits that he is unhappy and lacks friends, even though he was healthy and happy in junior high school. After high school, his physical condition deteriorated, and he had to wear hats and scarves and face endless drugs.
Tired every day, uncomfortable with school and life, but his parents couldn't understand it. Lonely and friendless, confused about the meaning of life, he also believes that life is not just about learning.
Finally, he suggested that perhaps the meaning of life is to spend it in search of meaning. The whole essay is full of fragmented thoughts, but it shows clear logical thinking. It's not just an essay, it's more like a 17-year-old boy standing quietly in front of you and sharing his heart.
This essay not only amazed the teacher, but also resonated with netizens. It turns out that writing is not a difficult task, as long as you express your true inner feelings, you can speak many words fluently.
This student has shown a talent for writing and emotional expression, giving a pleasant feeling. Even if you are not interested in learning, you may have a place in writing in the future.
The teacher said that the student's thinking far exceeded that of his peers, and he appeared more mature and melancholy. The teachers around him also noticed this and said that they would actively try to help him.
Here the author is reminded of a recently released film about a boy who is considered a bad student at school and a stupid at home. However, due to a suicide note forged by his father, he suddenly became popular. This gives the impression that he is an undiscovered genius with a delicate heart.
Although it is fictional in the movie and the suicide note is also written by Dad**, this essay is real and a true portrayal of the student's heart. We see his thoughts and perceptions of life.
Without this essay, we probably wouldn't have learned about his inner world. From his description, he has no friends and is reluctant to socialize with his classmates. I was always so tired that I fell asleep during class, and even the final exams could be spent in my sleep.
In adolescence, most of the students are energetic, while he wears a hat and scarf and is dependent on drugs all day long. He looked different, even a little weird.
Such students are often the most watched and the most vulnerable to discrimination. Perhaps without this essay, the teachers would not have realized that he had such a clear gift of logical thinking and thought.
Sometimes, we think that strange people are not necessarily strange, they may just be on a different level. Teachers and parents also need to treat students with this attitude, especially in high school. The academic pressure is huge, the age is gradually increasing, and the mind is gradually maturing. Students who seem to have a hard time to handle may find an unexpected surprise if they listen quietly.
Today's topic: What do you think about this?