The primary school student's essay "My Father" seems simple but has depth, and the head teacher was moved after reading it
The pupils are a very energetic and mischievous group of children, and their presence brings life to the classroom and makes it interesting to feel even on the exam papers. Even when it comes to writing, they can bring extraordinary brilliance to people. As their homeroom teacher, it should be a very happy thing.
Elementary school students may be a little lazy, but for them, "composition" is not a difficult task. They can write thought-provoking essays based on the people or things around them. Reading these essays may make you laugh or cry. Let's take a look at some of the works of elementary school students.
A primary school student's essay "My Father" caused a sensation, seemingly simple but contains depth, and the head teacher was moved to tears after reading it! It is not uncommon for elementary school students to get perfect marks in their essays, but those elementary school students with big brains can bring you unexpected surprises. For example, there is a primary school student, just a few lines seem to write a "philosophy of life": if you have a girlfriend at the age of 20 and have money at the age of 30, this is considered success.
It's hard to believe that this is the masterpiece of elementary school students, and the head teacher directly gave 100 points. This kind of composition is something that even some college students can't write. It is hypocritical to say that you don't admire, and you deserve 100 points. This elementary school student's family conditions must be good, otherwise he would not have such an insight.
Despite their young age, the way they think about problems is shocking and makes parents feel ashamed. As we all know, today's students are very precocious, they may not know how to be in love, but they have mature ideas. It seems like a simple thing, but in this schoolboy it is tied to "money".
Some netizens joked: It is difficult to become the parents of students who are in business, and they are really good at "settling accounts". The author would like to say that if elementary school students can do the same in mathematics, their grades will not be bad. Maybe you can become a top student, I hope the head teacher can give the right guidance.
In everyday life, a lot of interesting things happen. While the parents laugh it off, the elementary school students will write these into their essays. For example, "a power outage, scare this bear" is the words of the mother complaining about the father, which was remembered by the elementary school students.
For some reason, under the processing of elementary school students, this essay became "vivid", and the title was also very attractive, he named it "Calm". The story caused by the eye drops, I really want to know what my father's reaction was at the time, and the head teacher laughed after seeing it.
Primary school students are often more sensible than we think, they may not be good at words, but in their compositions, they can express their true feelings. Recently, a 9-year-old elementary school student's essay "Father" has caused heated discussions on the Internet and touched the heartstrings of many people.
The schoolboy's text is not lengthy, and the only mention of his father is only once. However, although it is simple, it contains profound meanings. He sighed: My father may not be able to give me anything, but he has given me everything. This made the head teacher burst into tears after seeing it, and said bluntly: "Know how to be grateful." "I can't help but praise this elementary school student for his outstanding performance.
In the compositions of elementary school students, we can often see the use of pinyin. This is a normal thing, because there are many words that are not familiar to elementary school students, but sometimes they write down even if they can't write because they want to be "strong". As a result, sometimes funny situations arise, such as "melon seed face" being written as "paw face". Perhaps only elementary school students can have such ideas.
Elementary school students can be strong, but the wrong words can affect the overall quality of the essay. What's more, for elementary school students, the use of pinyin is allowed. Elementary school students don't have to feel embarrassed because as they get older, they will naturally pick up more vocabulary.
In composition, the use of pinyin is acceptable, and elementary school students do not have to force themselves so as not to make jokes. If you want to write more in-depth and rich, you must use some words that have not yet been mastered by elementary school students. Therefore, there is no big deal. I hope that elementary school students will not be forced to use pinyin without hesitation when they need to use pinyin.
For this, the class teacher, as the parent of the students, can give appropriate reminders so that the primary school students know what can be done and what is not advisable. Let elementary school students know in their hearts. At the same time, the class teacher also has the obligation to help primary school students improve the quality of their essays and create more exciting content.
The work of the class teacher is not heavy, but mainly to encourage students to expand their horizons. It is recommended to encourage students to read extracurricular books, actively participate in outdoor activities, and enrich their life experiences first-hand. Of course, this requires close cooperation with parents, and the class teacher should ensure that they communicate effectively with parents so that they understand the child's developmental needs.
In the exam, the composition score is relatively high, and it is important for parents and students to recognize the importance of the essay. Each additional point will improve the student's overall score. Especially in the college entrance examination room, every point is crucial. Therefore, it is hoped that students and parents can remain vigilant and not take it lightly.
Today's topic: What advice do you have for elementary school students' essays?
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