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"Bolt Q" was written into the composition by the student, causing ** worry; Elementary school students look at romance **, causing **controversy; A high school student who posted a circle of friends in the summer violated the school's regulations on "going to the Internet and going to micro" and was notified of punishment; Earlier, a middle school student was expelled from school on suspicion ......of playing with his mobile phone in classThere is a lot of news and controversy about what underage students "can't" do.
For minor students in the mental development period, some people are worried that the increasingly complex information network is not conducive to their growth, and some people think that the number of minor Internet users is already huge, and it is better to block them. As students, how much space do we need to breathe freely, and how much objective protection and guidance do we need?
What kind of thoughts and perceptions did the above materials trigger for you? Please write an essay based on the materials to express your feelings and thoughts.
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The boundary between freedom and rule is in.
Text: Huang Qiruo.
The young man is like a bird with wings, his fiery heart yearns for poetry and distance, and the rules around him are like invisible barriers, allowing them to wander away from the dangers of the outside world, but they miss too much beauty. Hesitatingly, the importance of freedom and rules has become an eternal topic of the times.
In the past, high school students posted on Moments during the summer vacation to cause punishment, and then Internet buzzwords were written into essays to lead to controversy ......Behind these hot events, we are thinking deeply: where is the boundary between freedom and rules?
Spring, summer, autumn and winter, each with colorful flowers; The flowering period may be long or short, early or late, but it is extremely beautiful. The same is true for students, who are destined to have a unique development path due to their different talents. Quan Hongchan may not have excellent grades, but she was definitely born for diving; Bill Gates entered the threshold of Harvard, but before he graduated, he went out to work hard, which also made Microsoft's products go global. If Quan Hongcicada and Bill Gates were locked in textbooks, I am afraid there would be no diving celebrities and Microsoft.
In the same way, Beijing No. 11 School has opened more than 200 courses, and each student has his or her own unique schedule, and how to learn is up to himself. Li Xigui, the principal of the school, said that life is a coin, the front side is a choice, and the back side must be a responsibility. Only by giving students the space and power to choose will they be able to find the right education for them.
Freedom is important, but unrestricted freedom is dangerous. Just as the political textbook says: "Rules delineate the boundaries of freedom and are the guarantee of freedom", and appropriate regulation, protection, and guidance show the significance of freedom. When exploring the road to success, the guidance and reminder of the people around you is the Sinan who deviates from the route.
In the online world, teenagers often use a mobile phone to watch everything. Moderate use of the internet can help you relax and learn. But if you are too addicted to the Internet and can't let go of your hands, everything will change its taste, and the fangs of the Internet will slowly emerge: how many students have abandoned their studies because they are addicted to the glory of the king? How many aspirants have missed out on their goals due to the dizzying cyberspace? The regulation of the use of the Internet is like a good medicine, guiding lost students out of their paths.
Roots and leaves complement each other, and free space is protected by rules. Song Lian was carefully taught, and was criticized by the teacher, but he was more respectful, and after being diligent in "writing by hand and counting the days to return", he was able to be full of wealth in the future. It can be seen that with appropriate guidance and full freedom not to overflow, the seeds in the hearts of students can bloom and bear fruitful fruits.
Today's era has entrusted us with such a heavy responsibility, let us take freedom as a boat, take the rules as the rudder, raise the ideal sail, swing the diligent oars, discover our own talents, and finally bear the fruits of victory under the irrigation of freedom and the tempering of rules.
Comments
The article has appropriate ideas, prominent centers, rich arguments, rich content, clear argument structure, flexible and changeable sentence structure, and concise generalization. The author uses a rhetorical title to present an instructive argument, and the main part analyzes the argument in depth, dialectically analyzes the relationship between "freedom and rules", and finally integrates the analysis of these two levels to reach a conclusion of "how to do it". The logical clarity and profound thinking of this article are the most prominent advantages of this article.